Linda and John

Mmm

Since you're one of the four authors on literotica I check with any regularity, I suppose a glowing review is to be expected. It really was a very well written short story, I just hope to see more longer works from you in future - something along the line of Sisters Awakening or Brother and Sister would be nice, although these one-off pieces are good as well.

Oh! Nikki

What a well-written story, Nikki. You organized the scenario and sub-plots outstandingly. Also, it was refreshing to read a erotic story with such excellent style. I'm looking forward to your next story. Seems like jealousy could erupt in John's and Linda' office! Ray

Good clean consensual sex

I really enjoyed the intensity of the sex between the two people. Good buildup from the night out on the town, the strip club, etc. A good transition from her spending the night at his place, him turning her down and playing the good guy, and then she coming into the shower. I like the idea of two adults, consentually agreeing to satisfy each other's desires and needs. Keep up the good writing.

The perfect mix of a rare combination

Graphic detail but with style, passion and emotion, not crude or mechanical. Very exciting and the long buildup (like good sex) justifies the wonderful climax(es). Thanks you. Mr. Neb

incredible! this is fukin hot! xxx

Good work....

and need to develop the story further.This does have a lot of potential.

Wish I could give this story a 10.

Great from beginning to end.

Awesome story - she is ahead 2 to 1

Great story...As a romantic I hope this goes further.