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Desiree's Star Ch. 03

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by Anonymous09/22/06

good lord

are you trying to kill me?
You're amazing but i guess you heard that a few times by now haven't you?
i simply love it!
Keep going but woman write faster faster!

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by Anonymous09/23/06

Brilliant

love the story keep it coming can't wait for the next one don't make us wait to long.

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by Anonymous09/25/06

Really good...

I really loved it, but yeah, LOL you're not writing fast enough and the suspense is killing me! Keep up the great work, I think I'm falling in love with Gabe...

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by Anonymous04/16/16

Don't think I have ever read a more childish story on this site before.

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