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Consequences - Estelle

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by Master_falcon9002/27/10

Sad

Consequence is certainly a bitch... Sad ending... If there is an a heaven or hell, what will Victor do?

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by iowNotIou12/21/10

If some one

had taught her how to recognise lousy bastards like Louis as soon as they start, ie. to scream rape and deprive him of his testicles, this tragedy would not have happened.
But it is a well crafted story of what, unfortunately, does happen to people who think that they must be nice to nasty people.
I think that this seems to be part of the upbringing of too many females.
Sad.

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by MarvinS04/05/11

Tears

Brought tears to my eyes.

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by Duna04/09/11

FOR A BITCH?????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My one of promises for myself was when I was 16 years old, that I never got suicide for any woman!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (after a great disappointment) This Should be the first law for every male in the World!!!!!!

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by roscovich04/18/11

The consumate skill of this Author in describing emotions and his language use is staggering.

One of the best there is. Thank you Celt for excellent entertainment.

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by YamiBoy09/22/11

¡__¡

Great sad story. It felt very believable. Nice work! ^__^

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by MicknTrixie10/05/11

Well written

Very well written. She got much better than she deserved, she was a cheating whore that should have been tossed like yesterdays trash.

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by littleville7201/05/12

I lost my wood.

WOW....Was not ready for such sad ending. But thats the way life is sometimes.

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by phd7010/11/12

Too much of a downer! Shame on the author!

Can't deal with such a depressing story. Reminds me of a related saying: 'Life is shit and then you die' ! I don't believe that and don't appreciate a story of that type.

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by betrayedbylove11/19/12

DAMN

Mother fucker. Damn bitch drove the husband to suicide, which is the way of the coward, then does the same to herself. She fucked up. She cheated. She ruined every one's lives. Fuck

Don't Cheat On Your Spouse

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by Danger0912/27/12

Coward

Victor was a selfish pathetic wimp coward. Victor should've just dump the cum slut, he killed himself to ease his own pain but he forgot about the pain his suicide would cause on his daughters. These two people are selfish & immature, the wife only cares about what makes her feel good, the husband only thinks about himself--both failed to realize everything wasn't about them--there were other people factored into the equation. The husband killed himself over a fucking whore who wasn't even worth the contemplation of suicide let alone the actual act--the husband should've thought about the impact his cowardly way out would've done to his daughters, he'd never see them graduate highschool & college, he'd never walk them down the isle, he'd never meet his first grand kid--if these thoughts ever occurred to him he would've just wised up & kick the backseat slut to the curb. She wasn't worth it. She's just another slut who was addicted to a strange dick, nothing he did or said would've kept her faithful--his solution to the problem should've been to dump the cum slut & get on with his life. Love is not only blind-- it's stupid... After he forgave her the first time knowing he'd never be able to trust her again, I thought he was asking for it, the second time shouldn't of been a shock to him--he knew she just couldn't say no to Louis's dick. I feel sorry for the kids --raised by two selfish self destructive twits. No woman/man is worth killing yourself over. This story angered me.

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by cantbuymy12/27/12

sure

blame the husband because his whore slut of a wife drove him over the edge. glad the author made the whore die, sorry we dont get to see her in hell. 5

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by RePhil12/31/12

So was she

Good story

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by griart03/26/13

Louis?

Did he commit suicide too? Or was he hit by a bus and spent a long, long, long life as a quadriplegic until his lonely and miserable death at the age of 90, pissing and shitting his bed?

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by javmor7908/01/13

So sad

This was a tale of two sad individuals. Both of them were weak and tried to martyr themselves rather than face life as it was and fight. When you lose your sense of purpose, what do you have to live for? Unfortunately for these two, their co-dependant relationship was so strong that they wrapped their sense of purpose up into it. When the relationship broke, they lost their will to live. So sad.

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by monkcalm10/25/13

OH COME ON!

who doesn't love a slut suicide, its like a good guy holiday everybody feels better!

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by Huedogg210/25/13

nope just thecelts version of a man

or maybe that's a 50's, 60's and 70's man. From the 80's on, men killed themselves over the lose of something valuable. The divorce rate went up along with prenups. Men today will dump a cheating whore in a heart beat, maybe a second chance depending on how long they were married. But not likely. Thecelt just has a low view of men that dump cheating whores.

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by KarenE03/08/14

Common Thread

One thing I see in a lot of these stories is a wife whose husband is a good, considerate lover, and she decides she needs it a little rough, or a little kinky.

But instead of going to her husband, telling him how much she loves and appreciates how he makes love to her, but that she needs something a little different now and then, and presumably he will work to give her what she needs, she goes out and cheats. Then decides it's ok because it's just sex, and she still loves her husband, a distinction she would never accept if the shoe was on the other foot.

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by EgoTrixi04/10/14

Very emotional...

......even after having read this one for the 3rd time I still shed a few tears at the end.
Your story is full of emotion, drawing me into it (again) and by doing this makes me part of it evolving around me. Thank you for this experience. 5*

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by crock4502/14/15

Not woth it

Hubby is too weak for words! A slut like her is not worth the spit from his mouth!. In his weakness, he forgot all about his precious girls and the wonderful life ahead of them, his own success as a lawyer and all that life held in store for him.
I am the product of a divorce and I can tell you that when I re-married, I was blessed with a wife that is more beautiful, kinder, patient, understanding and loving than my first wife. I am SO glad that I didn't end my life like that weakling of a husband!

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by heartofstone08/12/15

What the fuck!

Who would want a lying cheating cunt like her to follow you through all eternity. Now the selfish bitch won't even leave him alone to be happy in the afterlife. Fuck her and the horse she rode in on.

The best outcome would be for her to be burned and have her ashes flushed down the nearest sewer with all the other shit.

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by Huedogg208/12/15

I agree with crock45

Please, he loved the whore so much he kill's himself....pretty weak.

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by christmas_ape02/24/16

sexcellence punctuated with sadness. so good, but miserable. loved it!



(hated it)

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by sbrooks10303/16/16

Thoughts

“I had gone to the motel today to break it off with Louis but he had insisted on one last time and I had reluctantly agreed.” – Why do these cheating wives agree to “one last visit and/or fuck”? It just about never works out, and is often when they get caught!

“I give you what he can't!" – He CAN, he’s just usually too considerate to fuck her like that!

“I cursed myself and my weakness all the way home.” – She SHOULD! She should have kneed the asshole in the balls, then when he was down keep kicking him there, and if anyone called the cops, charge him with attempted rape!

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by Seeker110704/10/16

@crock45

Sometimes the heart wants what it wants. She had betrayed him on a level so deep he saw no way out. Was he weak? Yes, doesn't make him any less of a man though. He took care of matters in such a way that it was the ultimate guilt trip. She can choke on her promises for all they are worth. I feel sorry for the kids personally. To be deserted by both parents, to find out that their lives were basically a lie?

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by Taffbanjo201304/17/16

Lovely Story.

Very poignant - five stars.

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