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Good story
But he became pretty much what he hated. Do you ever write about a character we can actually like?
Sigh! I guess some guys just weren't meant
to be married.
One thing that wasn't clear is why she changed her attitude about sex - that was what had caused the divorce.
Good story.
Regards, DJ
Good Story
A good story, JPB.
God-Damned Shame
That one of the black boys did not give her Nimber five and that he got religion and didn't at least give Herb a copy of the tape.
Come on JPB, you are getting soft hearted in your old age.
JPB rides again
Written with Bob's usual scintillating prose. Now if the characters and plot were equally scintillating...
It's been said that you are what you eat so when Bob's "hero" ate the creampie, what did he become? *snicker*
She wasnt like the rest, hell she was worse than
the rest. Not able to mail the tape, are you crazy everyone would have gotten a copy. Starting with the father of her other kids. She is one of the worst types of slut, in it for the money. Actually getting DNA samples on the kids would be a good idea, they are probably not his to begin with.
Too weird
It could have been a good story.
Good Read.
Thanks for sharing.
Nice story.
Held together well throughout. Gave it a 5.
Good story almost
He's still paying her and didn't mail the tapes. Shame shame. Should have sent tapes to every body even the bitch Mary Beth that was responsible for the shit.
Very funny right up until the end.
First a question. When she moved in with another man and had his kids, he should have gone to the Court and gotten the alimony dropped. It would have been a no-brainer. He was still on the hook for the child support unless he got a very good attorney and a sympathetic Judge and then maybe he got both the alimony and the child support dumped. Then he should have sent the tapes to everyone. The ending sucked because his character wasn't built as someone that would let her off the hook.
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