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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/16/06

Audio poem?

It would be great to hear your reading of this, a Kiwi accent is imperative. Good job.

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by My Erotic Trail09/17/06

pita

lured by the title and became absorbed in the passion of your pen. (~_~)

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by richardao09/19/06

Wow

Any man who would not be moved, moved enough to want more, will miss the love of a lifetime.
Your words are awesome. Thank you for sharing.
Sincerely,
Richard

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