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All is Well That Ends Well

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/22/06

About his final question

The answer is that he hasn't waited long enough. He'll get over it eventually - human nature is like that.

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by Anonymous09/22/06

still thinking with his dick is the answer

the question should be is it cheaper to keep her.

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by cageytee09/22/06

I always find your stories entertaining!

You have such a variety of ideas and you write much better than most of the other authors on this site. I continue to look forward to finding new stories from you.

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by sherlock4009/22/06

Another story where the wife equates sex

with love while she is fucking around on him. She doesn't "love" the others, she just has sex with them. But she "loves" her husband and still has tons of sex with him. How funny. I am glad you gave the ex and his "best friends" what they had coming to them. You always leave the husband feeling like crap about his divorce, though.

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by Anonymous09/22/06

BRAVO # 28

Excellent story.Very well written!This is an excellent portrait of the new American wife.She pursues a man for his wealth and ,betrays him to satiate her lusts.Her words of honor given before God have no meaning.Unfortunately, children are ,usually,thrown into the mix to deepen the despair.65% of marriages that collapse due to adultury do so as a result of the wife's actions.JPB, wisely,points out that the divorce agreement does not bring an end to the sorrows on the poor husband's part.Some of us were lucky enough to grow up in homes before women's lib.I can not recall the word divorce being used by any of my peers.Families worked together to solve problems.A person's word and handshake were worth more than some legal document.So much for the brave new world of the American woman!American men would be well advised to look beyond our shores for a soul-mate.American men need to find young women who place a value on home ,family,honor,and loyalty.These were once the province of the American wife but she has become too sophisticated to appreciate them.

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by Harryin VA09/22/06

This is a very SILLY and DUMB story

this guy is a turd and deseves everyting that happend to him... I hope the wife is raoped but thus guy ... who cares...

this story weas developed by JPB b/c is so a such
a twisted dude that he thought he could insert the old wife is gang fucked in front of drugged out or tied up husband thing ....

the Hubby hires her and marries this whore 6 month after meeting her and he is suprised that he doesnt really know her?

surely not....

then afer hears all his "friends" talk about the long term fucking of his wife in the conference room and gets it on tape

he says -- most amazingly..

One of the things I'm not is stupid. I didn't sit there and moan, "Oh it can't be; she loves me, I just know she does." Denial is not part of my makeup.

Jesus does anyne really believe that? he married Hillary 6 months after meeting her but he is NOT stupid and Not in denial...

makes sense to me...

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by louguy3509/22/06

Had it Right!

Harryin Va had the right idea, except...EVERYTHING that JPB writes is silly and dumb.

Cheers!

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by 09/22/06

cageytee has it right!

All other things aside your stories are entertaining - even the ones I don't particularly like (and those are always well written!).

He did what he had to do. How could his wife possible think it was okay. I agree with another poster: he;ll get over it!

Regards, DJ

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by gatorhermit09/22/06

Great revenge story

I liked your story, JPB. There's an underlying principle here - liars always underestimate people who tell the truth. Your story is a great example of this principle in action.

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by Tail End Pete09/23/06

Way to go, Bob!

As always the hard hitting victim ruins his tormentors. Just wondering, though, wasn't it possible for him to mail copies of everything to the guy's parents also? Yeah, the wives needed a copy, but I'm sure they only told their own parents. Ok, enough said. Good job as usual and keep 'em coming along.
Tail End Pete

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by Anonymous09/23/06

Interesting turn from your usual wimp-husband bull

Hey Congrats- you finally score 25 instead of the typical zero for your wimp-husband prevailing theme stories. Keep the drivel coming!

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by Nightowl2209/23/06

Very good reaction

I am left wondering how much time perjury is worth? 5 years?
Too bad he didn't find out she was a slut before he married her.

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by Ronnie Wachuka09/23/06

You've always got your detractors

JPB:

I don't always agree with your stories, but they are yours. Where I don't agree I quit reading. Where I do, I continue to the end, knowing that once again the tale will be interesting and well told. This story is no different. Thank You. Ronnie W.

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by peggytwitty09/23/06

Good story by JPB

It was quite entertaining to me. I love the devious wife thinking she had all the bases covered. Nice job.
It's unanimous for anyone with reading ability, you do write as well as anyone on this site. I even like about 20 percent of your stories.
PT

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by Anonymous09/23/06

A Great Story But The Last Few Words - Why?

He thinks about her all the time (well for a while so would I, but more about how I could have made it worse for the whore who couldn't have disrespected me more).

Then he asks himself why he feels so damned miserable. ??? The implication is he misses her and can't figure out why he feels bad. Can we get a witness or 3,000 to tell bobie why he feels bad - she cuckolded him while drunk in front of his friends and work subordinates while she and they demeaned him in the worst ways possible.

Gosh I thought he knew this or maybe he needs to read the story and watch the tapes again.

bobie - in many cases (maybe most of late) you have come a long way to entertain very many more readers by "not" having pathetic helpless self cuckolding husbands gracing your tails.

Now please consider riding this closing type implication from the very end of a very good story diminished by it. Your man implies that perhaps he should have just tolerated her fucking around and just watched (which no normal man would do either).

Please consider.

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by Chagrined09/24/06

Pretty well done , JPB

IF you want to pretend that the wife and friends are suspected terrorists and that the rules of juris prudence do not apply. My only complaint about this story is one i often have with your sotories and that is one where you just don;t do your homework. So often you write this court room drama shit but bnever examine the rules. there exists, in all 50 states, the concept of discovery. Discovery means that the prosecution (or complaintant) has to disclose ALL evidence. (This is why the shit storm over the rules for terroists, it goes against basic rights). The tape would have bever been allowed into evidence, and soprt couldn't get away with just telling his lawyer "You an't use that until I say so" without the possibility of disbarment. Remember all lawyers are officers of the court first! Any second rate shyster would have been able to keep the tape out of evidence which means they are right back to the "He said, She said". Other than that, it was apretty good tale, well told.

regards,
C

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by Anonymous09/24/06

um, the tape

the tape may have been admitted into testamony to
IMPEACH the others perjury.
since the tape was not in discovery, it would not have been admitted - if they had told the truth. but since they did lie and grossly, the tape probably would have been admitted.

mind you, it would have been better if he had taped the other later conversations where she admitted organizing the conspiracy of perjury.

on the other hand, she probably would get 50% even with the perjury.....

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by Anonymous09/24/06

Discovery rules are different...

between criminal and civil cases. In criminal case, the state or government is charging a citizen with a crime so there is a burden for full disclosure by the state (not so for the defense). In civil cases involing two private parties one party seek redress for some harm allegedly caused by the other party so discovery applies only to statements made by the two parties.

In this case, Chuck sues for divorce on the basis of adultery and Hillary asserts that no adultery occurred backed by the testimony of her lovers. Chuck is under no legal requirement to provide evidence that they lied prior to the trial. The judge is pissed because given that evidence Hillary's attorney would have had to settle closer to Chuck's terms. As a tactical manner, Hillary's attorney would have had to present a defense for the obvious cheating (e.g., emotional isolation from Chuck led her to seek others, Hillary had a psychological illness)if the case went to trial and they knew about the tapes.

It is amusing how some commenters try to blame Chuck for Hillary's actions.

Another great story - Thanks!

SleeplessinMD

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by Anonymous09/29/06

'Why?'

probably because the guy have low self esteem, ugly and lousy lover.

personally, i find successful businessmen sexy.

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by Alvaron5309/29/06

Good job

Good prose, not overly long and a compact plot in which the characters act believably, just as the author has painted them.

Thank you, JPB, for a good work of fiction.

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by KOLKORE04/30/08

A visit to JPB's deterministic universe -

This one I could digest with no trouble. If there is a sense of conflict in JPB's stories its of the tragic nature, not the dramatic conflict of evolving charaters. People in JPB's universe are predetermined to behave the way they do. Most of the time the males of the species in this universe seem to like being humiliated cheated on etc. This one is an exception (I got to it throughthe the new tag feature our host Manu provides). So other than the usual deterministic sense (like that of watching trains rushing to crush each other and none can change course), this one was quite good.

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by shango11/26/08

Dead wrong, this time Harry

If he'd just brought the tape of the guys bragging in the office, any first-year Law student could have convinced a Judge that it was just "watercooler" bullshit. As another poster stated, if he taped her laying out the intent to perjure herself, it would have been better. To all you other legal eagles, unless you're in a "No Fault" state, you may produce evidence at anytime in a Dissolution of Marriage suit. Even in a Criminal case, you can nearly always enter evidence/testimony to impeach a witness.

Good tale, Bob!

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by jackiedaniels01/16/09

ananswer to why,s comment

I,t had nothing to do with him being a poor lover, it was her being a whore that married him in the first place for his money, and nothing else ,I don,t understand how you missed it.

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by Anonymous03/10/09

Because

Because you are a damned stupid idiot, and should be laughing yourself all the way to the bank...

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by Anonymous08/05/09

Been There

Liked it. I went through a similar situation and fortunately was still only engaged and able to walk away. In my case we kept her apartment that she paid from her own check book and so I had less difficulty with totally severing all ties. I read some of the comments below and the part that no one seems to get is 'Why" he misses her...He really loved her, "Pure & Simple", he hurts for the loss of what he thought he had before he found out about her. My incident was 28 yrs ago and I still love and miss her, BUT, I never want to see or be near her again. I give this guy credit, "Balls" for being able to muster the strength to follow through. Yes, he had a calculating business mind, but, he also loved her, legitamently! Good story, no cuckolding for a change, there are some of us who don't go all to pieces and lose our sanity and self respect.

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by Anonymous08/25/09

Why?

The answer is obvious you shithead. You were stupid enough to love your wife. They're good for fucking, sucking, washing, cleaning and producing babies but don't make the mistake of falling in love. Doh.

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by oldwayne02/18/10

He might feel so damned miserable.

But he got even big time! I loved it. Definitely a Five Star read.

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by DWornock09/08/11

I rated it 5*****

I probably should have deducted 1* or 2** because sending the tapes to her family was uncalled for. However, since they lied in court, sending it to the other wifes was good.

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by tazz31709/18/11

ON A MID SUMMERS NIGHT DREAM

and then she awoke. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by chytown12/23/11

Funny Read.

Thanks for sharing.

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by Huedogg212/24/11

i gave it a 4 star

only because he's miserable

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by tazz31708/14/12

#2 FOR JPB LAST COMMENT

Pussy Good, Pussy real good. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Bfreetorun10/28/12

He did the right thing...

Even if he is miserable. Better a miserable single man than to be humiliated and made a cuckold of. I don't care how good the sex with her was.

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by cantbuymy07/15/13

good pussy may be hard to find but not impossible.

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by Overthefalls08/22/13

Misery won't last

He did the right thing. He'll get over his misery. That's human nature. Good one. She was a whore and thought she could have her cake and eat it to. I loved him "waking" up in the middle of her game. One of JPB's best efforts.

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by IronDragon09/01/13

What else needs be said?

I love a good Nuclear Strike, and JPB pulled off a classic! Sending the evidence to the wives of the Assholes was textbook, and then all of Wifey's family too! Gotta love it!

5 HUGE Stars for BTB done right!

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by sugna01/12/14

Most Interesting Point

The most interesting point is that even though he knew what a low life she was he was still addicted to her. Yes addicted, not in love. Many people mistake obsession for love. Wanting what you can't have is an obsessive thought. Wanting a beautiful woman who is faithful to you is every man's ego fantasy. It is not love. The fact that he almost had her, and for a while believed that he did only made his obsession worse.

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by sdc9207802/13/14

Why IS he so damned miserable?

He can hire as many Hillaries as he wants by the hour. Hell, he can probably still rent the original, since she's probably unemployed and homeless by now.

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by Isactagged04/17/14

Our friend the stupid wimp

To many tales abouts this wimp, always there is a way for fix a problem the wimp way.

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by sdc9207804/20/14

Why he might be miserable

He forgot to pay the messengers to make videos of the wife's family members opening the evidence packets and viewing the photos?

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by Tw0Cr0ws04/24/14

if only

She hid for six months then called him, and that is when he got stupid.
If he had told her he was still angry she would have stayed away long enough to divorce her for abandonment, no trouble.

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by Anonymous11/21/14

Well that works for revenge

I guess she didn't know him as well as she thought. He warned her, she ignored him and she paid the price. I wonder what Steve said to his wife to convince her not to divorce him, given the evidence she had? THAT would have been an interesting conversation to listen to. Good story Bob.

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by tazz31711/21/14

WHEN YOU START OFF WITH A QUOTE YOU SHOULD END WITH ONE

four-score and 1 he brought forth liars in court, Nuff said. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by sdc9723001/16/15

Maybe he's miserable because...

...the wife and her lovers all lied in court and there's nothing in the story about them being charged with perjury...?

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by Rhomanov03/16/15

*****

Miserable? It's your little brain that's miserable. You know, the one that started the whole mess. 😱

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by Anonymous04/26/15

hmmm

Her premise was she "needed" more sex? She never sought treatment?

Lies, she just wanted to cheat. She wanted him for the money.

Poor guy.

So many men marry someone they think loves them, surprising how many dont, they just want the security.

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by Anonymous04/26/15

Not all of us are like you dear annony . Some of us have good men

and we provide them with what they need because they provide us with what t\her need. It's called 50 50 marriage. Not like yours where you didn't provide a damn thing and she left you! And good for her. Marriage is good for both stay married. If they are nasty like you leave their scank ass goodbye

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by KarenE05/19/15

I Don't Know, Why Do You?

After what she said and did he HAD to do what he did, and he shouldn't feel the least bit bad!

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by sugna09/20/15

Why Feel Miserable?

Well, a normal person would feel miserable because there is no "winning" in a divorce. Both sides have lost, one more than another but still a loss. The reason he would feel badly is because he has just found out that the world is filled with con artists. They play on your fear, desires and most of all your ego. These people are often good at getting you to believe their lies and get you to depend on them. When they are exposed your reality crumbles and you feel like shit. It happens everyday.

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by sbrooks10310/22/15

Thoughts

You SHOULDN'T feel miserable! She was a lying cunt, and despite what she said she did NOT love you!

“Six months went by and then I go t a phone call from her.” – And how many guys has she fucked in those 6 months? She’s such a nympho, she certainly hasn’t been chaste all this time!

I've said this before, why is it if a wife needs more sex than her husband can provide it's okay for her to have lovers, but a husband is supposed to just "suck it up" if a wife loses HER libido?

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