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All Comments on 'Sex with The Boss'

by knightangel

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Did you ever hear of quotation marks?

Try using them for dialogue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What Date is it?

Is it talk like a pirate day? If not, I'd like an explaination for that dialogue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
my type of story

well done, short but sweet

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

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VaalseunVaalseunover 11 years ago
It could have been good

The story has all the elements of making it a good one. However, the lack of using stops and proper punctuation makes for seriously bad reading. I suggest you get someone to proof read your work before publishing it

gpetagpetaabout 3 years ago

a good plot having sex with your female boss

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