Culture Shock

Wow

I guess that is all that I can really say, this was a brilliant story.

Bloody Well Done

This is a story I would recommend to anyone who wanted to get into BDSM. This is a must read.

Remarkable

This is a remarkable story, and so very realistic, about a journey into a new sexual place.

A woman having desires that she can't understand. Trying to put them down, but in weakness she gives in.

Sounds eerily familiar.

Well done, and do keep writing. I for one, will keep reading.

wow

Please don't leave me hanging like this I must know what happens. please continur with the story

More please!

Please write more, this story had me hooked from start to finish. Don't leave us hanging!

Thank you so much for this story!
I couldn't stop reading it!
hot and very informative!

Thank you so much for this story. Well written, informative, and HOT! I'm prepared to beg for more!!!

MORE. PLEASE.

This is amazing! So informative and I found myself wishing it was made into a book! Please, you have to finish it, this is not a good cliff hanger, I MUST know the rest!
It is so well written and sounds familiar.. ;)

wow..

I think this is a great story. This is exactly what I hope will one day happen to me.. and it also gave me a lot of good information about the D/S lifestyle.

So Helpful

I relate to this story a lot in my curiosity and wish to know more about the lifestyle. I've tried entering into D/S relationships beginning online, but always knew something was off. Now I've discovered what was missing: respect. Thank you from saving me from being one of those girls who has to learn the hard way that not all Dominants are right for them. This is a wonderful story that helped me make a breakthrough in my life as well as educate me. I don't know if that's what you were going for, but you succeeded. Thank you, Sir_Nathan.

MORE.

Pleease don't just leave it at that hanger! You write such a great, thought-invoking story....among other things....

Please write more!

This was the most incredible bit of literature.
I haven't been so absorbed in a long time.
Thankyou!

(and please... I want to know where this relationship goes... please give us a sequel!)

So well written...

So much care and work went into this story! It's impressive to read a piece this well edited - it helps it go straight past the brain and to the right places. I couldn't help but think that the writer must be a woman, because of the phrasing and POV - so shocked when I read the username!

omg

So hot Sir
winkwinkjojo2

For private reading!

I love this! I printed it off for reading anywhere I want!

Oh. My. Goodness.

Sir,
I loved this story. Absolutely loved it!!! Thank You, for writing and posting it here.

so much loving!

i also was wondering if the author is a woman - finding a man who has THIS incredible amount of patience and communicative skills AND a dominant streak all at the same time - maybe i should move to Australia :)
having read the story with pleasure and wetness and intellect and with a little regret that i am neither as young nor have been as careful to select the right experiences for me, - i can only offer my sincerest thank You from the other side of the world (Germany).
:)

You are incredible talented. This was the first erotic story I read and coming back to it years later I'm really glad it was my first. It is well writted, respectful yet super fricken hot, was a great way to ease into BDSM, and taught me what to look for in my perfect guy :D

Oh my god

You write a story this long.. A really good story.. But very very long... And you leave us like that. You horrible horrible tease. I mean really 36 pages and you leave us without ANY of their weekend. Just cruel.

Thank you

That was the best story I've ever read on this site, thank you for writing it.

part 2?

Wow. The story... I read it in one day... :) Its apsolutley great, and i did read there isnt suposed to be a part 2, but i beg you to write one... I would be so happy if you did... But, keep on the good work with all stories, they are magical... :)

just wow

Rly hope u did more with this story than just post it here ... it deserves more.

PERFECT

Wow awesome story love it. So awesome. Charcters r awesome. All I seem to be able to say is awesome lol. Anyway I would totally read more ty

Loved It

Befitting the title I was "shock"ed and fell even deeper into being curious about this "culture". It's scary how life can be so coincidental; I am 20, virgin & been curious about dominance & submission. This is was wonderful story that made me blush, giggle, and smile like a idiot. Even if its just "characters in a story" I genuinely cheer them on and feel happy/excited for them.

Superb!

Interesting choice. Leaving all of us readers to our own imaginations as to just HOW fabulous Elaine's and Gary's consumation would be is probably best. Zero chance of dissappointing anyone that way.

Fabulous writing, I enjoyed it tremendously. In fact, this is the first comment I've ever left. (Although I do regularly vote for stories I like.)

Thanks so much!

solid quality

Well written, with lots of good solid background stuff for the curious, and without being full of cliches. Some of the best fiction I've seen in this genre, both in quality of writing, believability, and knowledge of the lifestyle itself.

PLEASE LET THERE BE MORE!

Please dear god let there be more! I'm obsessed with your story! So beautiful and erotic.... Please!

culture shock

Sir Nathan written one of the best stories. Culture shock leaves you breathless!
I want more!!!

Resilyn~

Wonderful story. I too want more. What about the rest of the weekend and after that? There has to be more. I absolutely got hung up in the story. Please continue or at least complete the weekend.

wtf

wheres the rest..........

Abdolutely Amazing

Although you had me in a fit of "nooooo"s and pouts, I think for a cliff hanger, that was the best way to end it. I read a little bit of this story over the course of four, maybe five days and it became an enjoyable part of my day, so ill surely miss it. Fantastic job.

breathtaking

I am like the others, I wanted more. Yet it was perfect, we all know what happens next. She finds herself and somehow in reading this story I feel I found some pieces of me as well. I even cried when reading certain parts.

All of us who feel we are submissive, want some of what this story offers. Not only was it intriguing and provocative, but also very informative.

Thank you for sharing it with us!

I want more, please

I read this story while recovering from an accident. It reminded of my submissive self. I read a little bit for several days. I looked forward to it like having a chat with an intimate friend. Although Sir Nathan was able to transport me to Elaine's bedroom, I was left wanting to see her submission truly take hold, (at least Friday night). Can't wait to be dominated again soon.

Thank you to the author

I read this story 5+ years ago and thought it was excellent. I had just started exploring D/s at the time and Gary and Elaine's journey gave Me My first real explanation of what D/s can be and why it is not be anathema to a healthy, caring relationship.

Then I met "her" in an online sim.

After more than a year of exploring in the sim and then outside the sim, we decided to become more serious and she became My online, long distance submissive and I sent her a leather collar as well as a "day" collar. Still, we had no real intention of ever meeting for real - we lived 1000+ miles apart.

As our relationship grew, however, that intention changed. I remembered Gary's concern for Elaine's safety and His advice for a real life meeting. I applied that advice to our first meeting. To say it was "wonderful" and "life altering" would be a gross understatement!

My kitten has worn My collar for going on 3 years now. I know, by your biography statement, that you are no longer writing, which I understand if your work is being stolen. However, I do wish to thank you for your stories as they are from an obviously knowledgeable and experienced Master. You have helped Me as well as, I'm sure, countless others find a sane and safe path. Without your stories, many of us would not have found those missing pieces to a happier life and fulfilling relationship. Thank you.

you need a book

This is very well written and very fascinating. Please submit to publishers and get a novel (and finish the story for me) ;-)

great

Very well written and intriguing :)

Luv it!!!!

This is my FAVORITE story ever! I only have one complaint and I know u cobered this in the begining but it would be AWSOME if u added more! Anyway BEST story ever!!!

uterly amazing

I have been reading for a long time in the BDSM section never have i been so entranced in a story...wish You would have written a sequel to it. I will have to definately share this with my Daddy Dom!

Mesmerizing

This is one of the most erotic and frustrating stories I have ever read. Elaine's story of exploration could so be my own except for Gary. Where are you?!

Could be me...

Not only is this story breathtaking and well written, but it made me realize the submissive in myself. And I can accept that part of me, now. I always thought there was something wrong with me. Thank you for letting me discover my submissiveness and soothing my concerns of being such. Thank you.

Beautiful.

This story is absolutely breathtaking. The discovery, the hesitation... you capture it so well. And the last couple lines! I absolutely squealed with delight! Thank you for writing this.

Thank you

This story was spectacular. I stayed up almost all night to finish reading it. I loved how real it felt- how much thought you put into the characters, and not just the two main ones. Thank you for writing.

I do wish, you could at least wrote something about the ride back to the ranch.. i didn't wanted it to end..

Outstanding

Even though at the outset you said we wouldn't be joining Elaine & Gary once they were alone, but the wonderful way you have written this story on the mental preparation of a willing novice submissive demands more of their tale. This has been without a doubt the best story I've read here. Congraulations. I wish I had a sub like Elaine, perfect!!

that was an amazing story. thank you so much. it taught me a lot. so sad to be done with the story. loved it.

Explorica

Thank you so much for this intriguing story. I couldn't stop reading and it has helped me come to some realizations about my nature.

Wow my dream story

I have read this story multiple times and it is still my favorite. I love the characters, the way it builds and grows. I wish there was more. I wish Sir Nathan was still writing.

Broken hearted in Seattle

my heart is broken that Sir_Nathan has stopped writing. Yet i continue coming back in the hopes that He will return, while reading and rereading this story as well as His other works.
Thank you for a beautiful story that has stuck with me and changed me.

Just amazing

I think it's only right to leave a comment when I enjoy something as much as I thoroughly, thoroughly enjoyed this. I laughed, I learned and I came hard. Like five times. You're a masterful story teller and I really saw a lot of myself in Elaine. It made me so curious about pursuing the bdsm lifestyle that I joined the chat yesterday!
The only thing that makes me mad is that Gary doesn't exist. I feel my expectations have become higher that ever before.

Wonderful

This has been one of the best stories I have ever read!!! I Really wanted it to continue. Still a Wonderful Story.