Culture Shock

Loved it!

Definitely a story that I would like to hear more of ;) Gary is quite the in-depth teacher, and this gives me a much clearer insight into something I've known for a long time - I am very much a sub.

Thank you for this :)

Very Well Done...Sir!!

If I could....I would give this story 10 stars !! Very well writtten...I'm glad you gave a warning about what the ending would NOT be......I'm sure many readers are disappointed; I think your plan....to leave the ending in the reader's mind works best. GOOD JOB!!.....Sir

Encore!

You should write an ending to this story... A nice yummy ending. :P

website

I only wish castlerealm was still an active website for curious people to gather information. This story was wonderful for opening my eyes. thank you for writing a story to give the facts in a fun way of learning. i am forever in your debt!

As Eye-opening as it is Sexy.

At the first mention I immediately went to CastleRealm, but unfortunately it was closed down. This story is as much a work of fiction as it is an academic dissertation into a world which many of the 'vanilla' will never get to see.
And this story was what gave me the courage to seek out the world that I know I've been missing for my entire life.

Wonderful & RE: CastleRealm

I want to say that this is the best piece I have had a chance to read. BRAVO! You make me wish that I could meet my own "Gary".
In regards to CastleRealm...... Here is the link to some of the archives that are still out there for the reading.
http://kinktoychest.com/index.php?option=com_cont ent&view=article&id=63&Itemid=63

Amazing & Sexy

I felt like you were reading my mind at times... This story was informative and interesting, but also very sexy. I almost creamed myself reading it...

Thank You

What a lovely journey, I Thank You.

Wtf

I read 36 pages of this amazing story waiting for her to get fucked and U LEAVE US HANGING BASTARD. But the leading up is amazingggg

Recognition

I really loved your story. Almost all the experiences she has up to meeting MasterServant in that chatbox are more or less familiar to me and I love the way you put them to words.

HOT!!!

U have totally change what i thought bdsm was.Damn i wanna be a sub,that was so fucking hot!! Great story!!

This story was so similar to my story that it made me shiver at times.

Amazing writing, very realistic. It had me reliving my experience from 7 years ago when I first met my Dom online and carefully proceeded to real life.

Beautiful

No need to say more :)

Best Story I've EVER Read on Literotica

I've browsed literotica for years, reading many many stories, and I have to say that this is THE BEST STORY I'VE EVER READ!!!!
Keep up the godly work, Sir Nathan

Seriously?!

I have read 36 chapters to find out that you stop here?!!! Biggest tease ever but an amazing!

Realisation

Truly wonderful writing. I feel like this could be a journey of my own, in the near future. As I read along with 'Elaine' discovering this new world and becoming a part of it, with support, love and discipline from 'Gary', it made me realize that I'm not weird - I'm different. Suddenly the feelings, physically and emotionally, that I've been experiencing over the past couple of years don't seem so.. abnormal; I've started accepting myself more. If I could thank you for real, Sir_Nathan, you've evoked a change in me that I want to continue to explore for the rest of my life.

A wonderful, moving story

A beginning Dom myself, I felt really moved at the reading of this story. It gave me an indepth description of BDSM that I had never found anywhere else before, and I would really like to thank you, Nathan, for having written such a powerful, thought-inducing, inspiring story. I have already begun sharing with friends of mine who are also into this lifestyle, or, as I am, beginning their own path into it. From the deepest of my heart, thank you for this story. You'll help a lot of people have a better understanding, and this is simply marvelous. ~~ A Dom learner in France.

thank you sir

A wonderful and beautifully written story. You have really opened my eyes to the depth and complexity of the lifestyle. Your words have offered great comfort, i thank you kindly sir.

noooooooooo

omg no you cant stop like this!!!! pure torture!!!

Thank you. Thank you, thank you. Beautiful, touching, exhilarating...perfect.

beyond!

This story truly touched me. i have always been curious about the lifestyle, but i feel that this story truly put words to everything i have ever wanted to explore and helped me discover more about my true desires and needs. i cried at the end and i now feel confident having my husband read this story so that maybe he can better understand the needs that i have been struggling to articulate to him. Thank you from the bottom of my heart!

Thank you

For once, a story about submission that understands it is willing and not degrading.

Perfect... and yet...

I absolutely adored this story! It is by far, hands down, my favorite story that I have come across in 4 years of reading literotica. Good show my man. However... I would LOVE to see how their story continues. And I hope you don't mind, but I took a few lines out of your story to add to my favorite quotes (and you're darn right I'm making sure people know you wrote it. ) :D

Kudos to you.

Very educational

The conversation about relationship dynamics in this story rises above and beyond just the BDSM lifestyle. It's about how to build a healthy, satisfying relationship! For me, someone very new to this arena, it was an extremely provacative education, good enough to make me less nervous and more prone to engage in the careful actions that will ensure that my first experiences aren't disappointing. And, fuck, did it make me wet! Thank you, Sir. ;)

So desperately want to read more! please!

WHAT!?

ITS OVER!? WHAT! COME ONNNNNNNNNNN! I WANT MORE

Amazing

I this was the best story i have read on here so far, it was absolutely amazing and i cant believe it ended like it did, you have to write more please!! :)

Amazing...

I literally fell in love with Gary. When they met for the first time, I had the most intense butterflies in my stomach. I was even more nervous than Elaine, lol. Everything was unnervingly real. I read the entire thing in one sitting. I could feel Gary sitting right in front of me, as if I were Elaine, and I was so extremely anxious to please him. I only wish that there might have been at least a LITTLE release at the end...maybe on the hood of a car... ;) and that Elaine would be a little more confident. I suppose that's it though, the charm of her innocence. Very well written, lots of detailed description, has everything an erotic tale needs in it. I loved it

I felt it!

Over the past couple of years I have begun to understand the nature of the D/s relationship. Your story enables the reader to sense the bond and connection that develops naturally in two people that recognise each other. D/s is really just another way of giving and receiving love. Thank you Sir_Nathan you succeeded in making it real.

After reading this, I can say that I am a sub.
I was doubting and doubting but...you explain everyting so well.
I can so relate to her.
Thank you.

Thank you

I understand so much more now, still not sure i'm a sub but i'm definitely curious

THOROUGHLY ENJOYABLE!

I've enjoyed this story so much. I'm hoping to see more of your work in the future. Oh---thank you for ending it where you did!

More!

Oh my gosh, please you cannot end it where you did! You HAVE to write more! Uhhhhh. Wish I was Elaine ;)

Beautiful Story!!!!

First thing, Thank You writing this story and posting it so Wwe could have the absolute pleasure of reading it. You have a gift for writing. While I agree with some about how it ended but I do understand why You chosen this kind of ending.
Thank You again Sir.

Donna

Thank you for this wonderful story

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Your sub is very lucky.

OMG

Just...wow....just....completely blown away....

Wish it had all been like this for me. Text book case of everything he said your NOT supposed to do.

God this was an eye opener. Beautifully written. Breathtaking. I was so nervous for her at the end. Wow........That's all I can say....wow.

Amazing

That was really wonderful amazing story. Thank you for writing it and postng it here. ;)

MORE

Plz tell me there is more! Read it 1 night and i wanna now jow it ends.

Breath taking :)

Wow, Your writing is amazing and Your sub is vey lucky. Please write more!

Bless You!!

Superb

Great story, well written.
awaiting the next story in suspense.

Thank you.

I have to say thank you, your story was a giant eye opener. I am exploring deeper.

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id like to try a smooth small glass one
the colors and shape are beautiful
with soft music and white wine

perfect

This is so good. I cannot express how much I loved this.

Grr...

Two more years to go. T_T

oh my god how can you leave it like that? Evil. i've loved this story,i found it while looking for something similar to a slave to the servants and got hooked. its explained a lot and i've recognised a lot of fantasies i've had that i didn't even realise were BDSM. anyway i loved it and though you were very good at getting into the female psychi, thank you and the next one had better be out soon!

I am blown away.

Wow... this is one of the most powerful stories I ever read. It had me hooked. Literally. Thank you.

more please!

I loves this story....wish there were more!

i value your work very highly

you have enlightened me on alot of stuff that, put simply, is difficult to ask or even find out about. thankyou. i think you write beautifully, eloquently and realistically. i beg you to write more, its painful to be left at this point

all the best