This writer certainly sprung a surprise on me. The ending was something else, and the beginning, well...the title says it all. Alicia REALLY IS hot! Let's just say that the few grammatical errors are more than outweighed by the sheer sensuality of this slightly kinky one-on-one encounter. It was very well done, and this writer is continuing to show promise. I hope to see her do even better in the future.
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Nice and original, and kinky too :P
This will be mentioned on the AH.
This writer certainly sprung a surprise on me. The ending was something else, and the beginning, well...the title says it all. Alicia REALLY IS hot! Let's just say that the few grammatical errors are more than outweighed by the sheer sensuality of this slightly kinky one-on-one encounter. It was very well done, and this writer is continuing to show promise. I hope to see her do even better in the future.
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