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Barb Cheated

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by LadyCibelle09/24/06

Your story.....

Your story has been reviewed. You can see the review on the New story reviews thread on the Authors' Hangout here: http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=4 28901&page=11&pp=25
Any comments or questions pertaining to that review can be directed to that thread: http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=1 8265130#post18265130

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by 09/24/06

Ya gotta pay to play!

She played, she paid!

Good story, as always, well written.

Regards, DJ

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by Harryin VA09/24/06

another really great story from JPB

the display of logic he used in the final metting is a killer.

He got her to freely admit and concede that he Is as a Man sensitive and considerate to her feelings and that is their history if he was doing something wrong or negelectful He fixed it a soon as he could.

There is no "communicaton" problem here... she never went to him to complain and/OR talk about what she thought was his lack of bedroom skills.

IF she had done so and the Hubby reacted with the idea... "too bad" OR "well thats all I can do"... THEN she might have a moral leg to stand on...

But she didnt do that. The fact that she thinks it is OK to FUCK the old boyfriend Lie about it and never tell her husband that He he is not doing enough in the nedroom Kills this marriage

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by ohio09/24/06

one of JPB's best

and also his saddest.

It's tight and perfectly put together, and there isn't much to say. They may love each other, but what she did to him just isn't acceptable--and he isn't going to accept it.

Well-done.

ohio

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by Anonymous09/24/06

Wasn't this story posted before?

Saying you love someone does not mean that you love that person! Love is a verb implying actions. It's just sex does not address the trust, honesty and respect issues.

Thanks for an excellent story!

SleeplessinMD

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by Rictic09/25/06

Good Story

Thanks for a good story, JPB.

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by batjac6909/25/06

nothing new

there was nothing new in this story except this time you didn't hire a private dick and use video equipment like in numerous other stories.

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by Nightowl2209/25/06

Nothing new maybe but a good stiry

I doubt many men could stay with a woman who was fucking someone else once they witnessed them together.
He's sure correct; she wouldn't have to rip him apart just tell him he wasn't doing her any good and he needed to do something about it.

Well, now she could go fuck Jeff all day and all night!

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by Anonymous09/25/06

Bullshit

One of your better stories. But, your last paragraph killed it for me. Thus instead of 100 you get nothing(00).

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by fumunda cheeze09/25/06

Great Story Bob

No Wimpy acting bullshit from this husband. No macho bullshit either. Just good common sense and reasoning by a wronged husband. I liked the end. The idea that a man could just forget about all the good times that the couple had enjoyed over the years is just as phony as some of the stories you read on here about cum sucking, ass fucked, wife watchers, that jack off while some other old boy fucks the shit out of his wife.

Great story. Like to see many more like this especially from the wankers that all seem to congregate here from the UK.

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by Anonymous09/25/06

SAy what

Last paragraph for me too. Oh, and by the way,

Who gives a rats ass if someone is reviewing stories someplace. We don't need some review jerk to tell us ANYTHING!

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by Anonymous09/25/06

What? The wimp husband did not take her back?

Typcial JPB wimp husband drivel-at least this time you did not have the wimp take her back & lick her boots-as you usually do in your stories. No revenge on her or the other guy? Another variation on the "wimp-husband" theme.

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by KOLKORE09/25/06

In JPB’S harsh world

All characters are actually cheated out of humane life. When finishing the story, I sighed in relief in the same way when you wake up from a nightmare, happy to realize it’s not your real world. Even when my main “informers” from the posters show that there is a promising story, to the most part its still (as this story was) an unlivable universe, and finally incredible one. The men characters are either shadows of themselves, filled with fears and grateful to still be accepted by their cheating wives, or they are cold determined and detached robots. The women characters are hardly human. They always cheat of course. They vary only by the degree of their despicability and cruelty. The cruelty of the final dialogue was breath taking indeed.

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by hellraiser6909/26/06

JPB writes

About the life he know's. If all you know is sluts, thats what you write about. My first two wives were sluts. I used to work around them all day. When I was younger. I only reason I don't write. Is JPB covers the subject better.

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by Anonymous09/26/06

Good Job

I'm not a fan of yours and normally skip reading your stories, but after readng this one I feel I must have misjudged you. My apology. I thought this was a very fine story about two people who really did love each other but had an apparent sexual incompatibility, Sad story especially in light of the fact that they both seem sincere and loving., and even though she blew it I felt sympathy for both of them. It must be a tribute to your writing. In most of these stories you tend to end up despising one or the other of the characters in the plot. 60 year old George

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by Alvaron5309/29/06

Liked the story

Good tale of a marriage gone wrong because the partners weren't communicating. Easy prose to read and nicely done. My only gripe concerns some hiccups in the grammar that your editor should've caught. I'd give you a 100 for the overall quality of the writing but the oopsies in grammar drop it to a 75.

I liked it and you have my thanks for a tale well-told.

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by Anonymous09/30/06

whimpy husband

I wonder what your mind frame was on this one the only good thing about this story was that the husband wasn't a cockhold but what wife expects a husband to hang around while she fucks some other guy, I think most readers perfer revenge in a cheat story and thats a better way to go.

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by bornagain10/29/06

barb

He should have taken a bat and busted out the windshield of the vw then busted the the boyfriends head and the rest of his body.
Pat
Atlanta,Ga

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by bornagain10/29/06

barb

He should have taken a bat and busted out the windshield of the vw then busted the the boyfriends head and the rest of his body.
Pat
Atlanta,Ga

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by Anonymous11/17/06

common sense that all we ask,why go back

trust and respect is what make a marriage and she don't have it for husband.

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by marriedwithballs01/06/08

As of lately I have become more attractive to

a certain type of woman, fiftyish, good looking and intelligent. Trouble is that many of these women are married. I keep remembering many stories I have read on lit. not the wimp husband ones but the ones where the husband still has his balls and gives his wife what for. The only problem is the things that the wives say after they are caught. I never never want to be around that type of woman...they are true predators and sluts and I don't like sluts.

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by Anonymous10/08/08

twisted thinking

bard would talk about the mundane, but not the lousy
sex life. this person comes back and feels no compulsion
to even address it. she wanted to play, and he screwed it up by finding her secret.
now she can have jeff as much as he'll play,or anyone else.
there should be more consequences for her.

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by Anonymous06/22/09

WHY TRY TO JUSTIFY!!!

THE BOTTOM LINE, SHE FUCKED SOMEONE WHILE BEING MARRIED. END OF STORY, GET RID OF HER AND MOVE ON.

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by Anonymous06/22/09

Good story. What a bitch, but it begs a question

Ok in this context he did right to fuck her off. What happens to them now? I think she quickly recovers, she's attractive and still young, desirable, and has no qualms about sex. A few years down the line she's learnt from her mistakes, with her new guy she doesn't cheat. Ok unlikely. So she doesn't ever get caught out then. She has a life. But the husband? Sex ain't big on his agenda. He's not a very social person, all his friends are work related, and now he has the big black sign above him. He's insecure, he'll find it hard to trust anyone. He better hang on to the dignity he preserved by kerbing her because it's a tough journey to a life better lived. Lonely. And he may not make it. Even his friends whisper about him. He called the fucking cops on his wife? Pussy action. So he grows bitter and sad. Resentful. Women can smell loser, he doesn't get many second dates, hardly gets to second base, and then...nothing.
So here's the question. Hotwife...or no wife? Encroaching loneliness or a swinging social circle of likeminded nudge and winkers? Hedonism or boredom?
I know this doesn't apply to many people on this site,which I assume is a fairly broad mix of society. But Loving Wives sure brings out the twisted and the creeps. I personally like that, as long as they can take a little of what they give. Better they spew their load of ranting misogyny and paranoid hatred here than on the streets, amongst our families. I sympathise with them, they'll never get the joy of erotica because they'll never be in a position to do so. And it can't be easy to love if you're in jail, whether literally or in one of your own making. Metarphorically.
I love my wife. We've been together slightly longer than the guys in this story. We both had shady pasts. She was extremely promiscuous. I was from hard tracks and have made out ok. We're both self educated and proud of ourselves and our little family. And we swing.
If anyone is still reading, I'm gonna close on a little vignette that I think sums up something about us. We were going out to a 'party' and I had booked a cab. It turned up and I yelled upstairs for her to hurry and went out to chat to the driver. I like seeing guys faces when she makes an appearance...sure enough she looked stunning with her thick blonde mane, a mini green dress just covering the cheeks of her bum, tan slender legs...and fucking flip-flops. Still...Thanks Just Plain Bob. I seriously hope I've written something other than pure crap. I would like to try a story. After all, what is fiction? And what ain't? Mancelt.

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by PapaMike04/06/11

And why not

just say "Barb, what would you do if it was me fucking someone in the back seat of a car? Could you accept that?"

Your characters never seem to be able to figure that out. When she says "It was just sex." all they need to say is "OK, I'm going out tonight to get some strange."

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by MissouriUSA04/09/11

One of the best of JPB's Stories!

Wham Bam good-bye ma'am! He appropriately moved her to the curb!

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by oliverra08/03/11

A different optic

American men are really funny and I presume that these stories reflect the general moral atmosphere.
Poor Barb, she is in love with a cretin who thinks only of himself his job and his sexual needs. It never occurs to him that his wife is a human being who has her own agenda. So he finds out that he's a sexual nurd and his reaction is that its all Barbs fault, when in reality its all his. Sex is only a small part of loving someone, what an idiot.
One feels that this describes a lot of true blue American men, and you wonder why your country is falling apart at the seams.

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by fern50108/03/11

Oliverra

Yeah really American men are funny, poor Barb has needs that have to be met and this imbecile husband wasn't up to it. Then the whimpy excuses that he has to work to pay for the house and food I find disgusting had he been unemployed he would have had the time to do his wife but also improve his technique and use his idiotic hard working neighbor's wife.
Had he been a real man he would have become a politician, someone we can respect like Ensign, Edward, you know real men.

Yes oliverra I have a sense of humor too.

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by huedogg08/17/11

the truth is that rould heel slut get what they deserve

and morons like fern501 and oliverra maybe should be a man before they talk about American men. Just because we don't wimpy up like men from other countries, doesn't give you the right to judge JPB. But any case, poor old trampy, slut Barb got what was coming to her.

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by roscovich08/24/11

This is one time that I agree with Huedogg 100% !!

Every word he said is a fact of life. The foreigners,especially those readers of Lit,appears to be asylum graduates. And most are illiterate. I suspect that their double digit IQ don't allow them to understand what they are attempting to read. Sad.

Oh,JPB,the story is excellent. 5***** !!

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by OldHideki08/24/11

Unusual JPB story

This is a faithful husband, strange... Well written and to the point, throw the unfaithful wife away.

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by DWornock09/03/11

Good enough that I rated it 4****.

The story is not realistic. However, the story had to be unrealistic or else she could not have been caught.

First, they would not be having sex in the back seat of a car. That is what teenagers do because they have no place to go and cannot afford a motel. Unless, the ex-boyfriend was married, the sex would have been in his apartment which would have made it impossible for her to be caught. Otherwise, it would have been in a motel.

Second, even in the unlikely event sex occured in the back seat of a car, it would not occur in a place as public as the parking lot of a club where people that walk by might see. Instead, they would have driven to some remote dark area; perhaps where lovers park but don't park next to another car.

In addition to being unrealistic, the action of husband is extremely harsh. The proper thing would to forgive and give the wife another chance. If a man wishes to be married, it is foolish to divorce a wife because one time she cheated or had an affair. He can replace her, but the next wife is just as likely to cheat.

After all, it is the nature of women to find a good and dependable mate and provider, and then when ovoluting to have sneaky sex with a more symmetrical man and climax with that man and to not climax with her mate (although she may fake it) in order to select the best genes for her eggs. Women that did not select the best available genes for their eggs given a low risk opportunity are not our ancestors.

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by JLRemora09/11/11

Although it's just a story, it does reflect the author's own thoughts and stance on the issues involved. As he's previously indicated. People who cheat, either by intent or spur of the moment, are, by their very nature, unable to provide the emotional stability a relationship requires. For some of us, it is a hard lesson to have to learn. On the other hand, once bitten, twice shy.

As for European and others, their own marital dilemmas are no different, at least for the men. From my personal experience, European men are no less apt to leave a cheating spouse as American men (some foreign romance films portray unfaithfulness and forgiveness as social sophistication, but that's a ruse used to convey the screenwriters/directors view of how things should be). However, there is a disparity in the women. American women are more likely to be contrite when found out. Where as European women, especially, French women, are prone to a "laissez-faire" type of attitude.

Of course, all of the above is just a general observation, as some women, even French women, are as faithful as any other women. And yes, many a European man is more likely to be unfaithful to their wives/girlfriends, than their American counter parts. I could claim it's the culture, but it isn't. Rather, I think it has to do with opportunity and human nature. And in that, I think we are all much the same.

By the way, I found the story to be very direct and equally poignant.

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by tazz31709/18/11

CAPTAIN FANTASTIC

and the BACK SEAT BOYS. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by chytown11/07/11

Good Read Bob!!!!!

Thanks for sharing.

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by tazz31711/19/11

WHAT DO THEY NEED WHEN DONT IS NO ANSWER

and a frustated cheater cant make a cuck out of him, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by RePhil11/28/11

Flat ending

Very unfulfiling ending. Kinda just hit the brakes and left the car with the engine running

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by saratu12/06/11

I have to agree with RePhil on this one, the end was a little less than what was needed.

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by nakdsub12/27/11

Bob

Good read as always. Thanks

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by phd7001/10/12

Problems with both wife and Husband!

Wife failed to communicate, husband was naive and didn't know anything about sex or female sexual responsiveness. She really did attempt to minimize his humiliation and should have been given a chance to enter counseling with him. Not a very satisfying end! Dan

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by Danger0906/04/12

Classic

Line " "I'm sorry that you saw that Rob, but even so it shouldn't cause us to get a divorce." lol... WTF did she expect him to do say ok you can continue to fuck him in the backseat of the car I purchased for you.... What a moron! Communication , trust, honesty, love, respect are all ingredients to a good marriage... Like Ron said if he was such a lousy fuck she should've said something he's not a mind reader.... And the way she put him down didn't do her case any good ... " he's a good fuck" what is wrong with this moron? I agree with rob what happens if 20 of her ex's pop up would that be another reason for her to act like a whore? Nice story no bullshit games straight to justice....

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by tazz31707/15/12

#3 GEE HONEY EXCEPT FOR THE SEX

you are the one i love,,, 1 MORE WAY TO LEAVE, tk u mlj lv nv

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by Duna07/15/12

Advantance of the Second Chance woman

Rob got the sex complain from his just future exwife so the fruit of the fixed sexual skils will harvest a Second Chance woman.......................Early communication......
BTW JPB has a new good Running Husband story on SOL and against this story he wrote a longer happy ending epiloge. The title is: "The Trip to Rancho Mirage".

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by betrayedbylove09/24/12

Typical

That 's what all cheating whore skank slut cunt wives say. "It's only sex. It's you I love."
Fuck them all. Husband did the right thing. DIVORCED the cunt.

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by cliffhanger2010/04/12

GRANDADS WISDOM

If your gona do something do it right and always finish it. This story needs to be finished. What the hell happened next?

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by Drbeamer333312/07/12

Enjoyed it!

Some chicks just don't get it. Stupid bitch.

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by cantbuymy05/04/13

in other words, you get to support me in the style i wish to become accustomed and remain there and i get to fuck you over. ain't love grand honey? not hardly!

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by sugna05/31/13

This is the way they all are!

Whether they "cheat" on you or not, this is the way all women are wired! Who really wants to get married? Women do! Women want to get married because it is in their DNA and their training. They need a man to make money for them like some kind of work whore and to do all their grunt work around the house. In the best case scenario, this is so that they can raise the man's babies and keep the home presentable. That best case rarely happens anymore. Now they use the man until his net worth is high enough, then they divorce him, take half plus the house plus child support and leave his remains in the gutter. Like the corporate raiders of the '80's when a man's break up value exceeds his dividend return, they simply dismantle him and sell off the pieces. Then they do it again with the next lucky winner. You have to be a fool to get married, let alone to get married twice. Never marry a divorced woman! She is now practiced in destroying men, that is why second marriages fail at such a high rate! If you think you are in love, go see a psychologist and get treated for it before it destroys you!

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by Duna05/31/13

I understand you

@ sugna I think the marriage with same country woman may be mistake after divorce. Somebody ex husband could find a better second chance woman from abroad. Look at this North Caroline guy from You Tube:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bIvJms3wlaY
H e wrote to his video:
I was married to an American bitch for 18 years. She got away with fraud and turned my oldest daughter against me. Going through divorce in my mid 40's I decided to look for love in a country that was family oriented. I married a beautiful 18 yr old Filipina and now I feel young again and in love!!!
I think the succesful marriage with trans continal women may be same good or better to a same country woman candidates...........
A personal note: When I looked at this video, that time I became REVENGE STORY FAN. I did not read any revenge stories that time, but I was ready to ENJOY them and I became a (not foundamentalist) BTB forever....................

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by IronDragon08/24/13

Twisted as usual!

Loved it, JPB!


5 Stars!

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