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First Aid Protocol

byMan Ray©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/26/06

Wonderful!

Another wonderfull poem! Great stuff, keep it coming!

PP

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by KOLKORE09/26/06

YES YES YES!

That’s exactly what I meant. The picture is there, almost totally intact, and the text! The lines throw your mind away! Now we are talking man! You take me to The E.R, Dealing with fire control, then I have to fuse the visual with the conceptual, now we are talking! Don’t let us wait for too long!

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by Man Ray09/27/06

Hiya, KOLKORE

You keep me on my toes you do. I have come to look forward to your comments. They make me grin and think in equal measure and I like that too!

Man Ray

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by Man Ray10/02/06

Thank you to...

PP, anon in USA. All I can do is but try! And I will keep coming!

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by duddle14612/24/06

Stunning.

A beautiful thought and an even more stunning photo. Well Crafted.

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by Amyfriend01/26/07

Very ....

well done

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by LeBroz02/03/07

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An excellent series, truly in the haiku spirit and tradition.

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by tazz31701/19/12

CLEAR

you should be OK now. TK U MLJ LV NV

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