What happeneds when his bosses finds out he broke the law and does she end up pregnant thats not right that the guard makes a cockolder out of hector and then have the women come and give him sex hes more to blame than rosa and hector he should be fired for what he did his wife at home should be shot for holding his job over his head and denieing him sex .
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
Not a story pleasant to read. There is no appeal to our better nature. Just an Official taking advantage. Yet, this Writer has managed to write convincingly about a difficult situation.
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Anonymous09/26/06
easy guys
This is just a fantasy no need to be angry. The story is pretty similar to other cuckold stories I've read. Anyway it was a fairly well written piece but I would've liked some more detailed sex scenes myself.
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Anonymous09/26/06
Damn Hot story
Hector was a lucky man to get to see his wife fucked and satisied that way, and then he got to clean her up with his tongue. Wow!!!!
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Anonymous09/28/06
It's Papi, not poppy
Solid work
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Anonymous09/28/06
Asshole
If you dont want comments on your sick story, then take off the option, jerk. Yeah boy, the racist morons support you for raping and humiliating "worthless spics and wetbacks". So you know where you belong, somewhere between Charlie Manson and the Clan. Disgusting, sick, slimey worm of a man.
Hope your wife finds out what you fantasise about. Maybe she does, that is why you aint getting any. Why do you hate Mexcians so much, asshole?????
I am not a mexican, but I just wonder what they did to you, CRACKER!!!!
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Anonymous01/25/07
to the guy that left "Asshole" for a title
please please, shut your god damn politically correct mouth. its a fantasy story, nothing more and JUST to spite your retarded ass. spic nigger honkey gook. there equal discrimination to all races, now shut the fuck up and continue jerking you son of a bitch.
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Anonymous01/25/07
Wrong genre?
Blinkerskite:
I'm at odds with your story. I truly appreciate how well it's written. It was an easy and intelligent read. But I have much difficulty with its content.
Your protagonist is loathsome at best. He abuses the authority of his position and takes advantage of an immigrant couple in dire straits. The degree of cruelty and heartlessness he exhibits must surely have as its origin more than just being denied sexual favors by his wife. His need to humiliate the husband goes well beyond his involuntary abstinence. Also, for me, the transition of the wife from almost virginal to downright wanton was not credible. She had been with no other man other than her husband. In front of her husband she submits herself reluctantly to this official. So much is at stake for her and her husband in not being deported. And with all this in mind she loses herself to the moment? Sorry, but I just don't buy that.
It would seem a story with this theme is better suited for 'NonConsent/Reluctance.' Your story was not a pleasant read. Perhaps I'll find your next effort more enjoyable.
An aside to those folks posting the last two comments: to the former, this story is not about racism, it's about the abuse of power; to the latter, I pose this question: Is it hard to breathe with your head so far up your ass?
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Anonymous09/16/07
I also Enjoy their women too!
I enjoyed the story and thought to myself, why not take advantage of the mexican. I love their women!! LOL
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Anonymous07/06/15
its not puta, its pusa, and the story sucks...
I did not enjoy this. The abuse on the husband is just wrong. The fact the wife becomes a slut in front of her husband is just not believable.Hopefully next story you write will be better than this one. This was crappy but keep on trying. Next time try to leave aside the abuse of other's dignity in a story
English
The officials job
What happeneds when his bosses finds out he broke the law and does she end up pregnant thats not right that the guard makes a cockolder out of hector and then have the women come and give him sex hes more to blame than rosa and hector he should be fired for what he did his wife at home should be shot for holding his job over his head and denieing him sex .
Pat Murray
Atlanta,Ga.
Well Written.
Not a story pleasant to read. There is no appeal to our better nature. Just an Official taking advantage. Yet, this Writer has managed to write convincingly about a difficult situation.
easy guys
This is just a fantasy no need to be angry. The story is pretty similar to other cuckold stories I've read. Anyway it was a fairly well written piece but I would've liked some more detailed sex scenes myself.
Damn Hot story
Hector was a lucky man to get to see his wife fucked and satisied that way, and then he got to clean her up with his tongue. Wow!!!!
It's Papi, not poppy
Solid work
Asshole
If you dont want comments on your sick story, then take off the option, jerk. Yeah boy, the racist morons support you for raping and humiliating "worthless spics and wetbacks". So you know where you belong, somewhere between Charlie Manson and the Clan. Disgusting, sick, slimey worm of a man.
Hope your wife finds out what you fantasise about. Maybe she does, that is why you aint getting any. Why do you hate Mexcians so much, asshole?????
I am not a mexican, but I just wonder what they did to you, CRACKER!!!!
to the guy that left "Asshole" for a title
please please, shut your god damn politically correct mouth. its a fantasy story, nothing more and JUST to spite your retarded ass. spic nigger honkey gook. there equal discrimination to all races, now shut the fuck up and continue jerking you son of a bitch.
Wrong genre?
Blinkerskite:
I'm at odds with your story. I truly appreciate how well it's written. It was an easy and intelligent read. But I have much difficulty with its content.
Your protagonist is loathsome at best. He abuses the authority of his position and takes advantage of an immigrant couple in dire straits. The degree of cruelty and heartlessness he exhibits must surely have as its origin more than just being denied sexual favors by his wife. His need to humiliate the husband goes well beyond his involuntary abstinence. Also, for me, the transition of the wife from almost virginal to downright wanton was not credible. She had been with no other man other than her husband. In front of her husband she submits herself reluctantly to this official. So much is at stake for her and her husband in not being deported. And with all this in mind she loses herself to the moment? Sorry, but I just don't buy that.
It would seem a story with this theme is better suited for 'NonConsent/Reluctance.' Your story was not a pleasant read. Perhaps I'll find your next effort more enjoyable.
An aside to those folks posting the last two comments: to the former, this story is not about racism, it's about the abuse of power; to the latter, I pose this question: Is it hard to breathe with your head so far up your ass?
I also Enjoy their women too!
I enjoyed the story and thought to myself, why not take advantage of the mexican. I love their women!! LOL
its not puta, its pusa, and the story sucks...
I did not enjoy this. The abuse on the husband is just wrong. The fact the wife becomes a slut in front of her husband is just not believable.Hopefully next story you write will be better than this one. This was crappy but keep on trying. Next time try to leave aside the abuse of other's dignity in a story
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