by soulfull_fish
You are a very talented writer. I loved the slow build-up and exquisite tension you created.
I Loved your story, Please keep writing stories,You really know how to write
Great writing, sexy style, nicely understated as befits all good tales in this category. Love to read more from you.
Fantastic story. The buildup and tension is wonderful, and your words flow easily, drawing the reader into the story and holding them there. I will definitely be looking for more of your writing. Soo hot.
This story was one of the most ingenuitive and creative that I've read on this site. I've noticed you haven't written anything for awhile, I hope you come back soon--your stories are amazing.
I always love bus stories and this was excellent. In fact, it was so good that I cruelly held myself back from orgasm so that I could read it twice! Talk about delicious!
I loved it!! Nothing better than a story that turns you on while making you laugh and feel sinfully playful.
Damn, now I want to take a nice long night bus and pretend to knock myself out too. Very hot.
This story has gotten me off time and time again. Many thanks! Keep up the good work!
Thank you for having an excellent grasp of the English language! :) Good story, fun theme, and no annoying "glitches". Please keep submitting pieces! :)
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This is wonderfully written - Dirty enough to arouse and having that most imortant of ingredients - HUMOUR !
I love your insight into the Male psyche.
This story has ticked all my boxes.
Well Done !
I think we all have the stranger fantasy and this one delivered. Please write more