All Comments on 'Night Bus to Montreal'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Tremendous!

You are a very talented writer. I loved the slow build-up and exquisite tension you created.

ljaljaover 17 years ago
Very Nice

I Loved your story, Please keep writing stories,You really know how to write

mpqm1968mpqm1968over 17 years ago
Mmmmm very erotic read

Great writing, sexy style, nicely understated as befits all good tales in this category. Love to read more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Still waiting.

What will she encounter on the return trip?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Impressed.

Fantastic story. The buildup and tension is wonderful, and your words flow easily, drawing the reader into the story and holding them there. I will definitely be looking for more of your writing. Soo hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Amazing

This story was one of the most ingenuitive and creative that I've read on this site. I've noticed you haven't written anything for awhile, I hope you come back soon--your stories are amazing.

song_birdsong_birdalmost 16 years ago
Nummy..

I always love bus stories and this was excellent. In fact, it was so good that I cruelly held myself back from orgasm so that I could read it twice! Talk about delicious!

celia12776celia12776almost 15 years ago
Very Wicked ; )

I loved it!! Nothing better than a story that turns you on while making you laugh and feel sinfully playful.

lil_cockteaselil_cockteasealmost 13 years ago
Hot!

Damn, now I want to take a nice long night bus and pretend to knock myself out too. Very hot.

EmbracetheshameEmbracetheshameover 12 years ago
Phenomenal

This story has gotten me off time and time again. Many thanks! Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Fucking hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
WELL WRITTEN!

Thank you for having an excellent grasp of the English language! :) Good story, fun theme, and no annoying "glitches". Please keep submitting pieces! :)

sleepshaggersleepshaggeralmost 10 years ago
I love this!

Really homes in on some fetishes of mine ;)

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
yum

Ready was great

GauchoManGauchoManover 7 years ago

This is wonderfully written - Dirty enough to arouse and having that most imortant of ingredients - HUMOUR !

I love your insight into the Male psyche.

This story has ticked all my boxes.

Well Done !

Raven7890Raven7890about 3 years ago
So so hot

I think we all have the stranger fantasy and this one delivered. Please write more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

So HOT..... This made my pussy ache & drip!!!! Wish there was more

the_leaky_penthe_leaky_pen7 months ago

This is super hot! One of my faves 💖

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