I am loving this story. I can't wait to read what happens next.
by
Anonymous09/27/06
Hi
Whats your problem??? Why do you feel guilty about preferring white guys? Your first series was set in slavery, and now this is about a prostitute. DO you have a complex or what?
Personally, I dont care much for sisters dating honkies but I got nothing against them either. It usually doesnt interest me, (same like mountain climbing or golf, really).
However, I have a few black friends of mine who date vanilla boys and they mostly seem to have a problem with it. One of them actually writes these slavery, BDSM, Non Consent type of sex stories like you.
Its a free country girl, you should feel free to love who you want, without having to give some sort of excuse for it.
Stand up for your vanilla minute man and relate to him as a normal woman, without having to portray yourself as a slave or prostitute.
by
Anonymous09/27/06
Is there more?
I love this series! Keep up the good work. I reference to the previous person that posted a comment.....i don't think the author is saying that she herself is ashamed of being attracted to men.
by
Anonymous09/28/06
great!
Thanks for posting another story. Keep writing more for this series. I'm sure there can be even juicer moments to come. I disagree with the person's negative comments before. I'm a black female who will proudly walk around her white boyfriend, and loves your stories.
by
Anonymous09/28/06
great!
Thanks for posting another story. Keep writing more for this series. I'm sure there can be even juicer moments to come. I disagree with the person's negative comments before. I'm a black female who will proudly walk around her white boyfriend, and loves your stories.
Wow! This is a very good story line! And don't worry about that negative feedback. I'll keep reading your stories over and over, cause they're just that good. Write on!
by
Anonymous09/29/06
A loving story about a prostitute?! Well Done!
You just keep writing, Girl! Let the ignorant jugementals do their worst. Your stories rock. The negative commentors have no sense of nuance!
by
Anonymous10/05/06
Once again...
.... you did it! Nice writing, caramelz! You almost make me want to share my own BW/WM stories. :-) Keep up the good work, and don't keep us waiting so long for your NEXT terrific submission! ;-)
-Staci*
by
Anonymous06/16/07
I'm begging you!
I thoroughly enjoyed it, please write another one.
Your stories are a slap in the face of our ancestors who struggled with sexual abuses and the degradation and refusal of theyre womanhood and very humanity. Black women should not be portrayed this way...we are queens...not the white mans fucking whore!
by
Anonymous04/26/08
Please!
Save the speeches about the degradation of our ancestors for a black history class.
Here at Literotica, people from almost every nationality, race, religion, and creed has taken aspects of their culture and put an erotic to downright nasty bent to it for the sake of harmless fantasy. Intelligent people know that this work of fiction is not real and has is no way affected our way of life or sense of being as a people. Besides, it's kind of hard to eroticize slavery, prostitution, etc., without the characters involved enjoying it. We leave that to writers in the nonconsent/reluctance section.
Excellent job caramelz, can't wait to see more of your work, hopefully a continuation of Lusting for Eva.
I liked this story but couldn't get over the fact that 'Paul' like so many other paying suckers fell victim to what girls in the business call "Captain-save-a-ho" syndrome (laughing and shaking my head, a page right out of Pretty Woman script). It is a sexy story though, I just wished Paul would have had more of that nasty dialog he started with Eva before he slid inside her. Oh yeah for me that would have been the 5 star mark.
So sad that one should be ashamed to admit who they prefer in a love situation. If Paul hadn't been afraid to own up to his sexual attraction he might have already been a satisfying relationship with a woman of his choice.
I really loved this story. Usually when I read a white man/ black prostitute story, I roll my eyes and hope for a decent story. However, I was pleasantly surprised and loved how crazy in love Paul was for Eva. I really hope there's another great story to come :) As for everyone else going on about how degrading and racist your stories are...it's pure BS because no one put a gun to their head and told them to read this. For some reason, they're the ones that made it to the Interracial Love Category. You keep doing what you're doing and let the haters hate :) I'll keep my eye open.
...although it clashed with me that he couldn't wait for Eva and had to see Tamika, then insult Eva a bit when he saw her. Otherwise, I loved how all he could do was think about Eva all week and how he ended asking her to work for him. The ending seemed rushed and this wasn't 2 pages like the last one...however, I'm VERY interested in Ch. 3. Hope to read that soon, with the same deliberateness as Ch. 1. :)
It might be possible for a sex worker and a client to enter into an exclusive relationship, but two very key questions are never actually addressed.
One is the financial cost. The pitfall is that he's rich, she's poor and financial considerations overshadow or eclipse all else. That can be awkward. If she resigns, certainly she needs to make up the lost income somehow. Taking a regular day job may only replace part of what she's earning now (even if the workday is longer); what's the difference (in actual dollars, pounds, euro, yen...) and is he able and willing to incur that expense by subsidising her living costs forever? The relationship needs to be stable in the long term first and needs to be financially sustainable.
The other big question is how much these two have in common outside the bedroom. Initially the sex is great, it's a lot of fun, but an actual long-term relationship needs to be built on something more. If all they do when they're not having sex is talk about sex, sexual partners, sex for money or anything contextual to the bordello, then what do they do out of bed once they leave this house?
If the answer to these two is "Paul and I have nothing in common except for sex, which is a lot of fun, but he's the one I call first when I'm out of money. Otherwise, we hardly talk at all." that's likely a pairing which is doomed once the initial novelty of whatever they're doing in bed wears off. Conversely, if everything fits together outside the bedroom too, who knows?
I'm not going to say this can't work. It's just more complex than it looks.
English
This is a great story
I am loving this story. I can't wait to read what happens next.
Hi
Whats your problem??? Why do you feel guilty about preferring white guys? Your first series was set in slavery, and now this is about a prostitute. DO you have a complex or what?
Personally, I dont care much for sisters dating honkies but I got nothing against them either. It usually doesnt interest me, (same like mountain climbing or golf, really).
However, I have a few black friends of mine who date vanilla boys and they mostly seem to have a problem with it. One of them actually writes these slavery, BDSM, Non Consent type of sex stories like you.
Its a free country girl, you should feel free to love who you want, without having to give some sort of excuse for it.
Stand up for your vanilla minute man and relate to him as a normal woman, without having to portray yourself as a slave or prostitute.
Is there more?
I love this series! Keep up the good work. I reference to the previous person that posted a comment.....i don't think the author is saying that she herself is ashamed of being attracted to men.
great!
Thanks for posting another story. Keep writing more for this series. I'm sure there can be even juicer moments to come. I disagree with the person's negative comments before. I'm a black female who will proudly walk around her white boyfriend, and loves your stories.
great!
Thanks for posting another story. Keep writing more for this series. I'm sure there can be even juicer moments to come. I disagree with the person's negative comments before. I'm a black female who will proudly walk around her white boyfriend, and loves your stories.
Love it!
Wow! This is a very good story line! And don't worry about that negative feedback. I'll keep reading your stories over and over, cause they're just that good. Write on!
A loving story about a prostitute?! Well Done!
You just keep writing, Girl! Let the ignorant jugementals do their worst. Your stories rock. The negative commentors have no sense of nuance!
Once again...
.... you did it! Nice writing, caramelz! You almost make me want to share my own BW/WM stories. :-) Keep up the good work, and don't keep us waiting so long for your NEXT terrific submission! ;-)
-Staci*
I'm begging you!
I thoroughly enjoyed it, please write another one.
Degrading and Sterotypical..
Your stories are a slap in the face of our ancestors who struggled with sexual abuses and the degradation and refusal of theyre womanhood and very humanity. Black women should not be portrayed this way...we are queens...not the white mans fucking whore!
Please!
Save the speeches about the degradation of our ancestors for a black history class.
Here at Literotica, people from almost every nationality, race, religion, and creed has taken aspects of their culture and put an erotic to downright nasty bent to it for the sake of harmless fantasy. Intelligent people know that this work of fiction is not real and has is no way affected our way of life or sense of being as a people. Besides, it's kind of hard to eroticize slavery, prostitution, etc., without the characters involved enjoying it. We leave that to writers in the nonconsent/reluctance section.
Excellent job caramelz, can't wait to see more of your work, hopefully a continuation of Lusting for Eva.
Good read but poor "Paul"
I liked this story but couldn't get over the fact that 'Paul' like so many other paying suckers fell victim to what girls in the business call "Captain-save-a-ho" syndrome (laughing and shaking my head, a page right out of Pretty Woman script). It is a sexy story though, I just wished Paul would have had more of that nasty dialog he started with Eva before he slid inside her. Oh yeah for me that would have been the 5 star mark.
She's
Finally safe, with someone that appreciates and maybe even love her...
Glad for her 22222222!!!!!!!!
So sad that one should be ashamed to admit who they prefer in a love situation. If Paul hadn't been afraid to own up to his sexual attraction he might have already been a satisfying relationship with a woman of his choice.
Such a great story!
I really loved this story. Usually when I read a white man/ black prostitute story, I roll my eyes and hope for a decent story. However, I was pleasantly surprised and loved how crazy in love Paul was for Eva. I really hope there's another great story to come :) As for everyone else going on about how degrading and racist your stories are...it's pure BS because no one put a gun to their head and told them to read this. For some reason, they're the ones that made it to the Interracial Love Category. You keep doing what you're doing and let the haters hate :) I'll keep my eye open.
I would love to see where they end up.
Damn he could have offered her marriage. She still will be a hoe, just a change in geography. He is definately sprung!
more
I'm so enthralled with your story, please continue my email is kmitchener19@gmail.com
Liked it...
...although it clashed with me that he couldn't wait for Eva and had to see Tamika, then insult Eva a bit when he saw her. Otherwise, I loved how all he could do was think about Eva all week and how he ended asking her to work for him. The ending seemed rushed and this wasn't 2 pages like the last one...however, I'm VERY interested in Ch. 3. Hope to read that soon, with the same deliberateness as Ch. 1. :)
This fails to address the two key questions
It might be possible for a sex worker and a client to enter into an exclusive relationship, but two very key questions are never actually addressed.
One is the financial cost. The pitfall is that he's rich, she's poor and financial considerations overshadow or eclipse all else. That can be awkward. If she resigns, certainly she needs to make up the lost income somehow. Taking a regular day job may only replace part of what she's earning now (even if the workday is longer); what's the difference (in actual dollars, pounds, euro, yen...) and is he able and willing to incur that expense by subsidising her living costs forever? The relationship needs to be stable in the long term first and needs to be financially sustainable.
The other big question is how much these two have in common outside the bedroom. Initially the sex is great, it's a lot of fun, but an actual long-term relationship needs to be built on something more. If all they do when they're not having sex is talk about sex, sexual partners, sex for money or anything contextual to the bordello, then what do they do out of bed once they leave this house?
If the answer to these two is "Paul and I have nothing in common except for sex, which is a lot of fun, but he's the one I call first when I'm out of money. Otherwise, we hardly talk at all." that's likely a pairing which is doomed once the initial novelty of whatever they're doing in bed wears off. Conversely, if everything fits together outside the bedroom too, who knows?
I'm not going to say this can't work. It's just more complex than it looks.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Lusting for Eva Ch. 02 or
More submissions by caramelz.