All Comments on 'Pelicans, Pelicans'

A light little playful write.

Now I understand! Every time you raise your head upward for inspiration, I am up for a good experience, reading one of your ‘celestial poems’! Got it! I can live with that.

Seriously, I loved the humor, the use of sound in the language, and did I detect an effort to simulate a structure of flying birds in the layout of the stanzas?

Bravo!

have seen that pic on my blog of those hungry pelicans and the september mullet run....its incredible the huge amout of pelicans fluttering in the wind diving and scooping fish...the sound is almost deafening...nice images art..kisses...blue

mentioned in New Poems Reviews. I liked the image of pelicans tickling the sky, though I felt the repetition of Pelicans was a bit heavy. It's fun to say, though. I think my students would like it. :-)