When a delivery boy delivers flowers to a neglected wife sparks fly. Before long Jane is being serviced on the kitchen counter. This a delivery boy that knows how to deliver the 'goods.' Hot!
This is the second of your stories I have read now..Excellent wordage and visuals. The coke bottle was a real surprise!
This was excellent. Good imagery and the ending was unexpected. Nice. Millie
that was and hopefully he'll deliver them flowers again
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Sexy Delivery Boy!
When a delivery boy delivers flowers to a neglected wife sparks fly. Before long Jane is being serviced on the kitchen counter. This a delivery boy that knows how to deliver the 'goods.' Hot!
Great visual
This is the second of your stories I have read now..Excellent wordage and visuals.
The coke bottle was a real surprise!
Very Good
This was excellent. Good imagery and the ending was unexpected. Nice. Millie
great tip
that was and hopefully he'll deliver them flowers again
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