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English
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Welcome to the Poetry side of Lit
With this light little piece
Surely worth a giggle!
I think she'd approve...
Nicely Parkerish... a hint of meter and wit. Well done.
Great!
Another rsum
WHEN YOU ONLY HAVE 1 OPTION
which to choose, TK U MLJ LV NV
As my students would say...
Dafuq? Fun little ditty. :-)
ok
Partners get boring; -- banal (but harmless)
I get lost in a crowd; -- cliched
Drunks end up snoring; -- banal; drunks+snore? work harder at poetry;
Screamers are too loud; -- ditto;
Critters aren't legal; -- somewhat interesting language;
Teens tend to swell a bit; -- unclear (hence not too useful) but harmless;
I ache when spread-eagle; -- graphic (and a bit of a cliche; but where is poetry?)
Think I'll stay celibate. -- a transparent attempt at humor, not original, not really funny.
You seem to have an ok brain. Use it, use it way harder. Peace.
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