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Weep For The Black Willow

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by Anonymous

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by vampiredust09/26/06

Excellent

imagery and figurative language adds atmosphere here, mentioned in today's new poem reviews.

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by LeBroz09/26/06

~~

All life's joys and treasures
So ephemeral;
Looking back we mourn their passing
And remember.

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by ishtat09/26/06

!!

I like this partly because the images are so clear and also because of the sharp contrast with the ancient European tradition that the willow tree is associated with malevolent magic.

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by My Erotic Trail09/26/06

I agree with V~

EXCELLENT poem! Tempo to topic, (~_*) I see the deer in blue... the Heron peg legged and recalled a flavor, I have not savored in awhile, redfish! But what I miss the most, fishing under the over hang of a black willow. Paramount poem! (~_~)

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by Maria239409/28/06

beautiful work, blue

I especially loved your descriptions of the swamp and creatures. Wonderful job:)

are you familiar wth 6 mile cypress outside FT Meyers?

xoxo

maria

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