All Comments on 'Carolyn and John Ch. 05'

to an otherwise delightful story. Love your writing, but this ending sucked. What the hell? Thats a little more reality than necessary. Not erotic at all, and actually depressing.

Life can be quirky but such is. I liked your depth and while the closing was bittersweet it was touching and extremely well written as was what preceeded it.

Thanks Author - nice work.

With High Regard

Very touching and powerful story. The realism injected into the ending definitely helped round it out.

this story could actually happen, which makes me depressed. however the reason it wasn't 100 was because i think a 'car crash' has become too much of a cliche. i know it happens but other things happen too. and they didn't have to die... cud have been in a coma or have become mentally incapacitated. u obviously have a creative mind, don't be held back by what you think others would accept more.

not sappy....because in truth it was a tale of mixed with infidelty and love, so the bittersweet ending was very well done. JV

Beauty can come from tragedy. Good story!