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Romantic Complications!
A wonderful read but could have used a scorecard to keep track of the characters and their sexual activities. Still, this Writer has the ability to turn out an interesting and provocative story. Well Done!
COULD BE BETTER
nice story n all but un believable. how can u not know whom u giving head. just not tru. kinda ruined the story 4 me i aint gonna continue readin other chapters
Hahaha
Giving head to wrong person??! Oops...
Stupid as fuuuuuuuck
Really he should know what he was doing, but LOL
Poor Desiree... BOY is he STUPID!
Why?
Your female MC's are ALWAYS childish as hell. It's a wonder these men even put up with them. That's not to say I don't enjoy your stories, but it'd be nice to see a confident main character who didn't break down over every little thing and stayed to talk situations out instead of running away like some 13 year old girl.
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