I rather liked it. It was well written and I like the idea and your style. The story is far to short though. Besides that good job and I look forward to reading more.
If that is the reward a guy gets for doing the dishes, I'll damn sure NEVER EVER wash dishes again. It's foam plates,plastic cups, microwavable meals, and plastic spoons, forks, and knives for this house again.
I'll bet this poor fucker doesn't have trouble with the protruding piles EVER again being married to this bad assed mothefucker... lol
I really loved this story. It is my fantasy, one which my wife won't play. But I loved it. It is well written, with just the right amount of suspense and time to get to the end. But not with too much interlude. I would gladly be your B****! Keep up the good work. I'd love to read more stories like these!
I loved your story. Like so many others it is a fantasy of mine that my wife will not entertain. All we can do is get some satisfaction from reading about it.
Keep it up
How about part 2 where the gorgeous hubby she just raped cuts her fucking guts out? Then tells her he loves her what a load a crap this story is.Talk about penis envy
Please email me and tell me that you are single so I can act out he husbands role in this!
I have to admit that I have read a lot of stories on this site, but damn! This one is the best! I got sooo hot. I absofreakinglutely love this. I made my man read it, and well, I just gotta thank you. I'd love to read a second part to it, and a third.....
Very cler and original and super hot...this man's wildest fantasy. Looking forward to more of your stories. Excellent!
If only I could get my wife to do something like that for me! I especially liked how even though it was a little rough, and a little mean, it was still about love. That made this story even hotter for me.
I loved this story, as far as some that I have read on this site, I think you captured the emotions quite well. Now if only my fiancé would be that easily convinced...
So hot! I have a strap on that I have used on myself and trying to get my girlfriend to use it on me. Your story actually playing out would be amazing!
We enjoy strap on tales and your's is a good one. The characters are funloving and real. Just like us.
Hot story I am a fan of strapon's. Though the detergent was a little off putting but to each their own.
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