I loved the phrase "heavy as a sack of flour" in reference to your son - or the narrator's son - as looking at my own son while playing his video game is truly reminiscent of this.
Wasn't this on the 30-30 thread today? So....how many days ago did you write this?? Ho ho! I've discovered your secret.
Excellent poem about something I'd never think to write about. lol
runescape has stolen our boys....I have set about to challenge them with dragon stuff ...trying to bring a creative side to the lads..you must find what they love and work it...wink...blue
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