All Comments on 'Bree'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
HOT!!! HOT!!! HOT!!!

As always, I'm never disappointed when I read your work, even if you said it was quickly put together. The premise is interesting enough to develop further into subsequent chapters. You are one of the best and hottest writers on this site. I just wish you would submit your writing material more frequently!! :)

Devoted fan

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great stuff!!

I absolutely loved this story and hope that you write subsequent chapters, maybe with different girls, too? Love the tentacles.

S-DesS-Desover 17 years ago
Your Story...

...has been reviewed on the New Strories Review thread of the Author's Hangout.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
wondeful! but....

I absolutely love your style of writing! except i wish youd continue your other stories...

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I love your work

It's amazing the amount of detail and emotion you portray with just a few words. Nervous, shy, sweetly and innocently responsive and then intensely sensual. You take your readers through the entire gambit. I hope someday to be as good.

nipnipnipnipnipnipover 17 years ago
cant wait to see more!!!

I like , I like, I LIKE.... I also cant wait for the rest of your stories, pleeeez finish them soon??

I just have one thing to say about this story, even though it is great, I just find myself wishing that the ending of the story was just a tad longer :)

love

rania

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
the absolute end???

what's that comment supposed to mean? this isn't the beginning of a series and this will be the only story! how unfortunate

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
What a pleasant surprise

Thank You for a wonderful read , I suspect I'm going to have a lot of fun working my way through the list of submissions I see. If you use this much detail in your heroines' feelings, Oh The Joy !!! Thankz Again !

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
NO!

I LOVED THIS what do you mean no more there HAS to be more this wAS FRIGGIN AWESOME!!!!

fyrekittynfyrekittynover 15 years ago
More

Completely wonderful! I want more! A series? Please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WOW!

This was so great, and I wish it didn't end yet! I like all of your work, though. Really great writing style.

fairiekittyfairiekittyover 15 years ago
Begging

I had to leave in the middle of the story, I had a horrible time concentrating until I could return to finish the story!!! I loved it, I am so wet. It is very disappointing, almost gut wrenching to find that there will be no sequels! Please reconsider.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
tentacle sex

naive, but nice

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great story

I really loved this story. I just wish there was more to the story.

virginfantaCvirginfantaCover 14 years ago
Please write more!

There is too much background to the story and hints at a deep plot to leave it like this. Your such a good writer, I know this story can be great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More

Nooo, this can't be the absolute end.

Just a little bit more, please.

Great story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Give us more!!

Please do not leave this story just like that.

You have a great imagination and this story is excellent. I have read your other stories, and of them all this is the best!

Please continue this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Jaikem

Aaaawwww but i I really really like Jaikem.....maybe one day you'll think to yourself, hmmm why didn't I write more with that character, he was such a good character too, he deserves more story. Maybe.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
More!

Please continue this plot, it is truly well written and the ideas novell.

jasmineleighjasmineleighalmost 14 years ago
More?

I think you should totally carry this on for another few chapters. Do wish men had those feelers though :D

MiakaMcCannMiakaMcCannover 13 years ago
butttttttttttttttttttttttt

I really want this to become a short novel learn more of them Pleaseeeeeeeee!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Please No. More!

I realize you said absolute end but please consider at least one or two more chapters so we can understand more about his position and her step-mother.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

I, REALLY, wish you would come back to this story and add more . . . maybe making it one of your series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
absolute and?

so harsh! LOL....c'mon pls lengthen the story....at least a short novel...or maybe a lengthy novel even and publish it...i'd definitely pay for whatever u write...you're very good

heyykayyheyykayyabout 12 years ago
please please please please please

"absolute" is such a funny word. for instance, i am absolutely done with my boyfriend...until we get back together. orrrrr, i absolutely quit smoking...between cigarettes.

add more please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
OMG

This could make such a good series!! I am begging, like many other people that have commented on this story, PLEASE continue this story!!!!!

GlosUKGlosUKabout 12 years ago
Begging you

Please could you expand the story of them and the world they inhabit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice

I have enjoyed many of your stories, keep writing

blahblahblah69blahblahblah69over 11 years ago

please continue this story , what happens next?

Nemo18Nemo18over 11 years ago
joining the chorus

Okay, I'm going to add my voice to the fray and ask that you PLEASE add more to this. It was awesome!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please please please!!!

We are all begging you!!! Please add more you can't just leave it at that!! What happend next? He suddenly claimed her as his and his alone so now what? What happens when the men come back and another guy goes to have sex with her? Does Jaikem freak out and attack the guy? What happens!!! You have such a good set up right here please continue!!

CoventinaNyxCoventinaNyxabout 11 years ago
Excellent

Short & sweet. Loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
loove it- please write a sequel!!!!!!!

Please please please please please write a part 2 pleease!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Wow!

I loved it, and the ending! Thank YOU!

Erika281Erika281almost 9 years ago
love this one

Great, love the ending and that it is only one chapter.

GemmaGreyGemmaGreyabout 8 years ago
LOVE IT!

And I love how you ended it, just wish it was slightly longer, those feelers sound really fun :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Why is there not a part two

Love this story wish it was a part two.

Naiad_AerialNaiad_Aerialabout 5 years ago

Great story. Wish there was more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Me too! I Want More!

If he's royal, what's he doing in a mercenary company?

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