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Suspenseful!
I love the way the suspense continues to build. The relationship between Cale and Katie is written with so much devotion it almost carries the story.
Intense!
I, too, love the suspense. A lot of thought has gone into character development as well. I love the interaction among the characters. (And my heart melts when Cale and Grace are together.) Having read the previous 4 installments, I'm really anticipating number 6! Keep going SD!
OMG
I am LOVING the plotline so far! I'm anxiously waiting to see where you take the story next! Please hurry!
WHAT!?
are you shitting me? YOU LEFT A HUGE CLIFF HANGER. PLEASE finish. PLEASEEEEE
Bring it on!!!
I still love this one,,, hot and bothered or suspenseful, you've got me,,,,,, can't hardly wait for the next installment.
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