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need to hear more
As much as I love the continuing story line, I am getting a tad frustrated with all the failures for Gabe to get it together. Why not simply profess his love?
hurry hurry hurry
ooooooo the suspense is killing me for these two to get it on!... talk about bang their heads together!!! MORE MORE MORE!
Love it...
I check back just to read your story..really good plot for a new writer...please keep up the good work and let the new installment come quickly before the suspense kills me!
another one
heh you're the reason why i keep coming back to this site! I love your stories!
Why...???
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Gabriel:'How could I be so fucking stupid?' 'How could I not check to make sure it was her? I finally thought I had it right, and there I go again fucking everything up.'
Her face tightened as she realized it wasn't her he was after it was Jessica. He was more upset about Jessica leaving than he was about Desiree finding them.
...???
Why would she think that? Here,she hears him explain exactly that he confused Jessica with Desiree without him knowing she was there listening to him! How could she jump to the conclusion that he's after Jessica??? This is not just wrong, it's not even possible for someone to be so stupid. :/
These 2 need to grow the fuck up, quickly losing interest
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