All Comments on 'Hand in the Nookie Jar Ch. 01'

by blinkerskite

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
big chock of shit

67 year old man and two women which are siters.and the young son walk away.make a lot of sense.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Inane Storyline

Leave writing to people with at least half a brain...sheeeeeesh!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
don't listen to the detractors

Nice start. Now continue the story please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Has Potential

I don't know why some people have to jump in with negative comments so quickly. Personally, I think there is a lot of potential in this story. Keep it up. But don't hesitate to make the chapters a little longer, provide more detail.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Oh my god!

I don't know how the others think, but it is hot to me. Very very hot. I look forward to lots more soon!

tenbears43tenbears43over 17 years ago
not to bad

give it some more time i think you'll work it out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
chapter 2

When will chapter 2 be available?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Keep writing, You'll do nothing but improve

You're a very good writer. Loved your story. Keep writing, there are people out here who appreciate your efforts.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
poor son has none

the boyfriend should have come out and figured a way for the son to join.maybe the son creeps into bed nude.the boyfriends directs him on his back and the mother not looking mounts him.and as she works up to a orgasm and she realises the bigger cosck belongs to her son.she too far gone to stop .she rides her son to orgasmamd encourages him to come in her pussy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

NICE STORY. Short but nice. It gets you excited yet isn't over done. Doesn't go on and on and on w/ details repeated and over done. I really like this story.

Alex BelligAlex Bellig7 months ago

Amazing story and well written. These type of stories need not be long, just as you write, short and sweet.

Wish there was a continuation though...

After 18 years, hope you see this post and write at least one more chapter.

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