by blinkerskite
67 year old man and two women which are siters.and the young son walk away.make a lot of sense.
Leave writing to people with at least half a brain...sheeeeeesh!
I don't know why some people have to jump in with negative comments so quickly. Personally, I think there is a lot of potential in this story. Keep it up. But don't hesitate to make the chapters a little longer, provide more detail.
I don't know how the others think, but it is hot to me. Very very hot. I look forward to lots more soon!
You're a very good writer. Loved your story. Keep writing, there are people out here who appreciate your efforts.
the boyfriend should have come out and figured a way for the son to join.maybe the son creeps into bed nude.the boyfriends directs him on his back and the mother not looking mounts him.and as she works up to a orgasm and she realises the bigger cosck belongs to her son.she too far gone to stop .she rides her son to orgasmamd encourages him to come in her pussy
NICE STORY. Short but nice. It gets you excited yet isn't over done. Doesn't go on and on and on w/ details repeated and over done. I really like this story.
Amazing story and well written. These type of stories need not be long, just as you write, short and sweet.
Wish there was a continuation though...
After 18 years, hope you see this post and write at least one more chapter.