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Jesus, Og...
It's amazing how much terror and suspense a one-page story can hold. I felt my blood run cold at the thought of such a twisted (and fitting) revenge plot, and then when she returned to reveal that it was a prank... God. The frenzy of their coupling after he regained his freedom was very powerful, as well.
Wow!
I'm shivering. What an amazing tale of death and re-birth. As always, your writing spurs me to improve!
Ha! What a twist!
What a twist, from the twisted mind of Og! :) Loved it (and I didn't think you could top last year! What was I thinking!?) Great job, Og, good luck!
Good one!
This Writer has discovered how to write a story that will produce shivers, make you look behind you, stay awake at night. Wonderful story - well told.
duddle
Way to Go!
I figured the guy was toast after I read the first part several months ago! The sequel was just as much fun!
Thanks!
Warped
Not sure what to say. I mean, it was a good story, but glued uteruses, dead babies, revenge and all that... well, warped.
Well done and well deserving of a 5.
All hail the Goddess!
Plenty of warped horror and not a ghoul in sight.
All kbate said and... Og,have you considered professional help?
Loved it.
Wow!
Twisted, intelligent, vengeful...What more could you want? I just loved the giant, inflatible balloon artist! You had me hooked there! Great Story!
~Good Luck in the Contest~
A different twist...
Unusual story! And very well written.
Fusionnée
(Abs and Vana)
Strange, but gripping
My God! I don't know what to say really. It was obviously very good. You had me with the revenge theme and then when it changes into passion suddenly and so smoothly, I am amazed that I go along with it so readily. And then, the subject, fertility goddess and rebirth... totally weird. So, um, I don't know what to say. I'm a bit disconcerted about liking something so twisted so much. Very well-written indeed.
typical OG
Your writing style is very singular and distinctive and literotica would be the poorer without it. Good luck in the contest!
Genuinely twisted...a real gem!
The story was hilarious. Yours is a truly unique mind, Og. This one's a definite winner. Good luck in the contest.
Freakin hilarious!
This was the most hilariously, wickedly twisted story I have ever read! Where on Earth did you come up with that. Now all I can think of is waiting for the giant balloons in the Thanksgiving parade "giving birth". It's hilarious. I'm sorry. Wonderfully written, twisted!
great story!
weird and twisted and great.
awful :/
i didnt think you described whatever device you were talking about very well at all. it didnt make sense nor was it arousing. sure it was twisted and unique, but probably could have been so much better.
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