All Comments on 'Trick or Tryst'

Love the story!! Good luck with the contest.

Fem

Great job, Minx! It was positively hot, evil and all that good stuff, but isn't it a little extreme to kill a guy for being a cheating asshole? Don't get me wrong. I loved your idea, but now my stomach's all messed up from reading this.

I wish you luck.

I'm guessing this was more of a trick than a tryst. A brutal tale, angelminx ... remind me not to cross you. Great story.

is a dish best served cold. :)

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Patience performs the dirty deed; but hey someone had to do it. Read this tale of horror at your own risk.

Good luck on your Entry

Great read and a good reminder that hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.

....this IS Horror! LOL. Some lives are going to be "snuffed" out in Horror from time to time. Revenge for cheating is no better or worse a motive for murder than greed, I suppose. Certainly more along the same kind of Gothic lines as some of my stuff. Well done.

But that didn't make it any less disturbing once I got there! Hell hath no fury, indeed. Great work, and good luck =)

hardly a pleasant read, but I do like how you screwed the tension tighter and tighter! Good luck in the contest!

Good plot for a Halloween entry. It's a good story.

Fusionnée

(Abs and Vana)

Minxie, whoa!! What can I say?? *shiver* Well-plotted tale of revenge... I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!

Amidst the Halloween tales of monsters, a tale of purely human insanity is a great twist!

Loved it!

while obviously in real life killing someone for cheating is still wrong, as a story it makes a really good read... and it is a horror story...

the story but I have to agree, killing somebody is a little extreme for cheating. Or calling you by a nickname you don't like.

So this was an evil brutal cold blooded murder and she's clearly a psychopath, the police officer is clearly corrupt as hell and probably for sale. And these people are all accomplices to a murder.

All because he slept around.......

Honestly I think you really needed better justification for all this. Or else not tried to make her out to be in any way justified with the thankyous at the end.

Could it be that even authors sometimes get mentally ill? It seems to me this author is a good example of this. Murder? And even the dumbest idiot knows the chances of her getting away with it are very, very small. Or did you want to flaunt your poor life with this story?