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Congrats!
Love the story!! Good luck with the contest.
Fem
Yikes!
Great job, Minx! It was positively hot, evil and all that good stuff, but isn't it a little extreme to kill a guy for being a cheating asshole? Don't get me wrong. I loved your idea, but now my stomach's all messed up from reading this.
I wish you luck.
"Your cheatin' heart, will make you weep"
I'm guessing this was more of a trick than a tryst. A brutal tale, angelminx ... remind me not to cross you. Great story.
Revenge....
is a dish best served cold. :)
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Sinister happenings!
Patience performs the dirty deed; but hey someone had to do it. Read this tale of horror at your own risk.
Good luck on your Entry
A woman scorned
Great read and a good reminder that hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.
While I wouldn't agree with it ethically....
....this IS Horror! LOL. Some lives are going to be "snuffed" out in Horror from time to time. Revenge for cheating is no better or worse a motive for murder than greed, I suppose. Certainly more along the same kind of Gothic lines as some of my stuff. Well done.
I could see it coming...
But that didn't make it any less disturbing once I got there! Hell hath no fury, indeed. Great work, and good luck =)
wow, that was intense...
hardly a pleasant read, but I do like how you screwed the tension tighter and tighter! Good luck in the contest!
Evil!
Good plot for a Halloween entry. It's a good story.
Fusionnée
(Abs and Vana)
!!!!!!
Minxie, whoa!! What can I say?? *shiver* Well-plotted tale of revenge... I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!
Absolutely Great!
Amidst the Halloween tales of monsters, a tale of purely human insanity is a great twist!
Loved it!
great story!
while obviously in real life killing someone for cheating is still wrong, as a story it makes a really good read... and it is a horror story...
I loved
the story but I have to agree, killing somebody is a little extreme for cheating. Or calling you by a nickname you don't like.
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