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disappointment in black and white

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by Anonymous

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by vampiredust10/01/06

Witty

touching and a joy to read

Excellent stuff, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

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by Anonymous10/01/06

the life of a pet

You obviously understand the life of a sub.
Glad you have Him who cares for His pet to type softly.

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by WickedEve10/02/06

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Good poem, but I'm obsessing more over the story here. You're talking about two guys, right? One who hears the typing and the one you're wanting to pop up online and say, "Hi." Anyway, interesting... Has me wanting to ask more questions.

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by Anonymous10/02/06

a peek

under you late nite covers ...fantasy and the real ..crossing..I like the concept..blue

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by GuiltyPleasure10/02/06

I love...........

.........poems that ruffle the mind and make you want more. There's a story here. Well written.

Tess

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by lostandfounder10/03/06

A moment...

of life told very well. I like the feel of the greater currents under the words.

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by My Erotic Trail10/05/06

in black and white

I felt the passion, of no passion

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by MyNecroticSnail10/07/06

title

works well in this strange interlude of hope and discontent

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by unapologetic11/09/06

Love how...

I love how it circles back on itself.

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by LeBroz10/20/07

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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 37,500 poems.



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by fridayam06/22/10

O yes

I know that kind of silence. Well put, beautifully told. x

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