All Comments on 'My Darling Linda'

by FFGusher

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Erotic Dreams!

After the loving comes the wine and the remembering of how things were. A lovely erotic tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Corny

Your descriptions are too much. It gets boring. You come across as a person trying to use big words. Do yourself a favor and work on creating good stories, interesting characters, and dynamic plots that capture the readers interest.

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