All Comments on 'Halloween Offering'

I'm not strong on sci-fi, but your vivid imagination held me tightly in it's grip. I could never write this story, but you did it with apparent ease, and very, very well. Top drawer writing, Jenny

That's definitely a unique spin on Trick or Treating! :O)

but not for you, obviously! Unique spin on an unusual topic! Good luck!

came as a shock... great story!

I'm loving the amount of in-your-face surprise endings in this contest - especially the well-done ones like this one. I normally don't get into sci-fi much, preferring the fantasy side of the cat, but your descriptions pulled me into the world. Well done, and good luck in the contest!

I don't read much sci-fi either... (like, practically none) but Jenny, you did this category (and the contest) proud with this one! I like, I like! :)

Sci-Fi and horror, that is. Excellent portrayal of a future world or an alternative one. I loved it. Good luck in the contest.

of sex, with horror at the end. I used to go trick or treating when I was a child, but I never had any treats like the ones here. No tricks, either.