by justincbenedict
That was an absolutely horrible story that showed immense abuse, suffering, and pain. please do not post again.
I think you went a little too far on this one. It was more disturbing than erotic. You might want to tone down the abuse. She seems more of a classic abused person than a love slave.
This story is what it is. Maybe add a warning, but they don't have to finish it if they don't want to.
Pissy people complaining because someone dares to call it as they see it. Anonymous or named account doesn't matter. All oponions are valid good or bad. Pissy says you don't have to finish this. That is true. You don't have to finish this to know it is not bdsm. Not consenual in any proper way. This is a story of long term abuse and psychological damage. It is sad and sick and not erotic in any way. The story is valid for what it is, just recognize what it is.