I especially liked that the narrator wasn't presented as being more "macho" than his friend. They all got into all the varieties. It would be great if Sally had a friend to join them...
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Anonymous10/28/06
nice work
After reading only Ch 01 it seemed incomplete. Considering the two parts together take it far enough and together are really good.
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Hot Story
Fantastic story!!!, can't wait for more...
very nice work
I especially liked that the narrator wasn't presented as being more "macho" than his friend. They all got into all the varieties. It would be great if Sally had a friend to join them...
nice work
After reading only Ch 01 it seemed incomplete. Considering the two parts together take it far enough and together are really good.
Nice Story
Very good ending.
Does Sally have a friend?
That would get sexy.
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