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jpb returns
title says it all
Even for bob
this is sick.
AIDS?
"But I worry. I worry a lot"
Well....'duhhhh...' ever heard of HIV?
More to go
Bob, why didn't you throw in pissing and bukake to go with the gangbang. Your stories make men look like fools. And we are not.
belittlement of husbands
i like some of your stories, but in some of them like this one, i believe u have a woman write them, i cant believe a man will belittle other men as much as this. i know u prob say, its just a story, dont mean anything. but story after story like this will matter to some people.
bullshit
just another fucking wimp from JPB's mirror, married to a whore, she isn't worth the bullet to kill her
Hmmmmmm
Spew, cuck, vomit. I know you write this stuff for yourself but bloody hell....
for me it's the lying
that's the problem. Presumably at their wedding she promised to "forsake all others", all the while having absolutely no intention of doing that.
It's one thing to have an arrangement: "honey, I'm going to fuck these other guys while I'm away, but it has nothing to do with our love for one another". If hubby wants to go along with that, fine--different strokes for different folks.
But to do this behind his back is to disrespect him. I don't care how much she says she loves him--she's treated him like dirt.
ohio
the story was good,but the plot sucked
if the plot don't make sense,then the story gets a low score.if the plot had make sense i could gave a good score.you write this way and i score this way.
Only in Bobbie's world
In Bobbie's world STD's don't exist. (unless he needs them for the plot)
I'm starting to think Bobbie's pushing an agenda. Maybe he thinks women should be going after all the cock (size or numbers? Both?) they can get and men should just learn to like it.
I also wonder why when an author wants to make a woman as nasty and depraved as they can it's always the black cock or gang bang?
BRAVO # 38
The quartet of stories which JPB has submitted are excellent! At the same time,I hate them.I hate all the stories that JPB has put forth on this theme.I have always given his works zeros.It was not because of JPB's technicle ability as a writer, he is excellent!I hate these stories because they are the truth!OHIO has missed the point.JPB's gives us an excellent insight into female sexuality.We hate JPB's stories because they expose the myths that we hold dear for what they are;LIES!Promiscuity is natural to women.They love it!Men work themselves to death for a myth of what can never be.Authors such as Winterfrog and Hardaysnight are, also, held up to derision because they dare to tell the truth.JPB keep up the good work and you will be in good company.
Once again, he gets it wrong.
It's called betrayal for a reason. And with the basic JPB excuse, "I give you all the sex you need" from the wife. I gues she doesn't give him all the respect he needs. I can't help but think she would be one of those women who would lose her mind if he fucked around on her.
Dear poor old bobbie
You have stated that you write just for yourself.
Writing crap like this shows how little self respect you have for yourself. Do you need to have abusive comments hurled at you.
You must have done something horrible to a woman and now you feel like you must punish yourself.
Do most of the readers a favour and forgive yourself.
thank you anyway.
z00time
What bullshit the story is and some of the replies
no real man of any color would put up with a bitch doing that to him while she is away. yes, she might have an affair and she moight fuck someone while she is away. But a group!!!!!!! No I'm sorry no man would fucking forgive or put up with that. This is afictional story that gets JPB off.
JPB is mentally ILL I think
there really isnt any other way to explain this... for example why is it that the wife has to fuck 9 black guys at once?
how does that add anything to the story? couldnt it be 1 black guy or maybe 2?
and how can any woman fuck that many black guys that often and NOT get an STD? or AIDS given the high infection rates of Black men in America in 2006 ?
the wife argues that half a loaf is betetr than No loaf... that the hubby is better off having sex with her and the wife fucking lots of black men... than not having her at all.
Interestingly this also seems to be a the idea behind JPB vile pathetic wretchedly bad stories.
Just another old and ugly stupid wimp writer
To old and to impotent to be interested in women...so this shitface have to make all the women whores and all the men wimps because it is what he is
There are for sure some stupid idiot wimps that may like his stupidities but the world is full of cuckolds....because there are so many cheating wifes to fuck
For JPB....eat shit you filthy animal and GO KILL YOURSELF
Do you all notice how Anonymous, the same asshole
Anonymous who reads all of these stroeis and then bad mouths the writter keeps reading them? Jesus boy you must find work. Get out, take a walk, for Christ sake do something besides jerk your little 2 incher or you'll go blind man. hehehehehe Don't you know we are all laughing at your sad way of life boy. And yet you keep read everyone of these Loving Wife's stories. You really love them don't you? It's OK little dick you can tell us. We all know you love them even if you won't say it. Otherwise why else would you read them all, them all. Oh yes so you cans show us your great Literatry talent of writing shit head responses to them.
I knew...
... That when I read this you would be getting some great feed back. I guess your readers think this site only publish true stories. As long as you touch the feelings of so many you must be a great writer, even I did not like the way the husband excepted his role, but you do have away of touching our emotions. Keep up the great writing, its getting where I like the comments almost as much as the story.
Mike
An excellent..
fantasy story. Unfortunately too many readers view your stories as real life dramas when everything in the story says otherwise. For example, Cynthia would not be able to make VP of any company if it came out about the gangbangs. She has other salemen in the company also seeking to become VP so these antics would leave her vulnerable to them or anyone else who gets the goods on her. Lastly, the marriage would not survive long term (is she going to do gangbangs when she is in her 60s?) because the husband will eventually find someone else (Cynthia is gone 50% of the time so why should he not get some pussy also).
SleeplessinMD
Hooray for Anon down below.
First of all Bob..your story stunk just like her cunt probably did. If these big black cock white sluts only realized that a horse is much larger than the largest black and they are , unlike blacks, are nice creatures. I would much rather have a wife that fucks horses rather than black men.
My eight inch cock wouldn't fit in any case but A horse never gave a woman AIDS
SOS
More Wimp husband, whoring wife from Bob. Same tired old shit. Vastie, shut your motherfucking mouth. Shit, listening to you makes me want to go Postal.
Didn't understand the story
Maybe her husband should get a can of black spray paint and do up his cock so that it looks all nice and shiny black. That way he can get some nookie at home and she won't feel like she's lowering her standards any lower than they already are. Heck, with a nice thick coat of enamel on his dick, she won't even need to get lubed up to have sex, it'll be so slick it'll just slide right into those big ol' holes of hers.
I do have a question: what does she do when she gets sick with the flu and/or pneumonia from being around all these strange men? Does she like to do it while coughing and hacking her lungs out with a high fever? I mean, she's got a sex drive that won't quit where black cocks are concerned so I figure a little bout of the flu or even pneumonia won't stop her. So how does she get all them black dicks then? Maybe she calls the paramedics and they do her or something.
This here story wasn't very erotic. I mean them black fellers just stuck their dicks in her sloppy holes and that was it. Not much of a description of what she did and who did it with, just that they was black men. It's kinda boring if you ask me.
I guess she'd been getting rammed by black cocks for so long that the novelty had worn off. I mean, face it, one black dick is pretty much like another, don't you think? After you've had one or maybe two, how can another one or fifty be much different? I'd think it'd get kinda routine and all but then again, I'm no expert on getting fucked by black cocks.
Oh, I had another question. How come her company didn't know anything about her gangbangs? They must be the stupidest mofo's on the planet b/c surely somebody somewhere would've seen what she was doing and give out the scoop. If they were that dumb, why in the world would she want to be their CEO? It don't make no sense to me.
I gotta wonder about her husband. He's a successful businessman in his own right so why stick around? She doesn't love him and she sure doesn't need him for sex or much of anything else as far as I can tell. Why would they stay married? I would think he'd want to move on and let her get on with her black gangbangs without any obstacles on the home front but I guess that would be too easy.
Well-written, JPB
But when you make your women REALLY crazy, why must their lover(s) be black? It just brings the hardcore racists (and the some of the "casual" racists, like it appears "HarryinVA" is)out of the woodwork. Is "Stormbringer" one of your aka's?
Fuck all you racist crackers and ol boyz
Always the same shit! SOme white cracker fantasises of watching his wife fuck many black dicks. Other stupid crackaz come out of the woodwork insulting blacks. So, my conclusion is, fuck all you crackaz.
And fuck your old, skanky white ugly hos (except for my mother in law, yeah I am married to babylon). You must all be sick and crazy thinking nine, healthy young black guys will want to fuck an old, skanky white bitch! Shows how sick white Americans and English men are. Why is it that all these white crackerz between 40 and sixty like to write these stupid stories about blacks fucking white women. You probably spent most of your lives calling us Niggers, and now you know you're close to death and trying to make peace with God.
But dont give us old, ugly cracka sluts. Just give us cash. I mean, the Germans had to pay the Jews, so why dont you White American Honkies, you English, French, Dutch, Spanish and Portuguese bastards pay the brothers for all that slavery, colinisation and rape of the black women??? Keep that old, dry white pussy, just give us da cash. Maybe we might even let you old white blocks suck our big, medium and small sized dicks. I know you dont care, long as its black.
And as for that asshole saying he'd rather have his wife fuck a horse than a Nigger, yeah, fuck you!!! You always leave these animal comments on all stories. You talk big, but if a black man was around, you wouldn't talk shit at all. You'd probably eat his ass if he told you to, lily white coward. SO, just shut up BIEEEEEEETCH!!!!
And as for JPB I didnt even read the story coz the ENglish are cum eaters and shit soccer players. That is why JPB loves black cock, seeing Drogba, Essien, Saha, Makelele and all the other blacks bringing life into dreary English soccer. (Fuck Michael Owen and Lampard and Gerrad too. In fact, fuck the whole Island.
Why?
You've really got me wondering. Obviously, you're a talented writer and, to write that well,you must be an intelligent man. In addition, you can write some fine stories like,"Barb cheated", and yet you continue writing rediculous stories like this one. There must be some point to all of this, but obviously you're not gong to reveal it and are going to continue to mystify readers and make most of us revert to the practice of skipping your stories again. Too bad. What a waste of talent. 60 year old George
Back to the same old wimpy husband
JPB; I thought you had finally gotten your husbands to have some balls, instead of being some sort of suck-ass wimp, taking sloppy seconds from his wife's black lovers. "Barb Cheated" & "Bev's night out", I thought, yeah man, Bob has finally got some balls, or least his "hero" has, refusing to put up a sleazy slut wife, scewing out on him. But no, both with this story, & the following two new ones, back to the same ol', same ol'. Cynthia "hero" husband, is independtly wealthy, could find a faithful wife, who would & could be devoted to him, but instead puts up w/ a N'loving slut. What kind of sicko is this guy? & why, what possible motivation could he have to stay there once he knows what he knows. I just don't get it.
Gosh It's Hard To Respect Someone Who Doesn't
Say bobie - who are your hero's. The cunt sucker for black cum from a wife who can't respect you?
Or in this case, do you respect the pathetic wimpster man so into watching and knowing his wife is as addicted to black cocks in quantity as you are addicted to writing about husbands addicted to helpless male humiliation.
While your few small following require a fix of male humiliation at interval, why are you not able to stop playing the race card and the helpless male so into his wife's humiliation of him card to seek attention?
This act of yours is so repetitive and derisively consistent that it offends 99.9%. Even in fantasy, no one except the very demented, sick and freakyly weird would cherish and look forward to following gang-bangs of 3, 6, 9 or 12 or more cocks of any color into a cunt and mind so sordid as the wife's you glorify as acceptable to the cuckster wimpsters you employ to doggedly play your sick game.
Why has no one ever told you that you are not sexually erotic or arousing in these debased below human convention tales that only appeal to those poor sick souls into the ultimate male disrespect? That the women you tout as their lovers are only as scornfully disrespectful of normal humanity as you can make them to be compatible with the cum sucking excuses for males from your mind.
bobie - we know you read these efforts to tell you how sick you must be to pound on this theme for years and years. We know that you see the only true emotion you continuously drive with it is the hatred of your characters and anger towards your sick mind that dwells on helpless male demeanment. Your supportive readers of yesterday must have been fewer and more basely needy than those of today on average. Do you not understand that your old mimeograph machine needs a new drum with some male respect plus some real world reality and not just name changes.
So why do you persist? Does the head butting wall getting softer or is it just your head? Or are you so into the self punishment that you feel is due for the addiction you cannot shake?
That must be it. Others so afflicted have either changed, gone away to a lessor site, or just gone away - perhaps to seek the help they finally realized was needed.
The shame of your ways is that your ability when used to arouse and entertain the semi-normals here is very near to the top here and anywhere.
But such is life. Choices drive each of us, but few seem to understand that this isn't just a dress rehearsal. It's a use it or lose it this one time around.
Please step back and try to respect yourself for us - and yourself - or not.
One Question
Hi JPB,
" ... I give you so much love and affection that sometimes you even push me away so you've lost nothing there. So tell me, just what has what I've been doing cost you?""
My question is this: She is quite likely having unprotected sex. What if she gives something to her husband? Will her actions have made a difference then? Sure, she may be "The Best Piece of Ass" he ever had, but in an AIDS world, does that mean she is allowed to have unprotected sex. The fact he does not raise that seems to be a serious issue--even for a jock...
WHAT ? ? ? ?
She got screwed up in her early life, she stayed screwed up, and she screwed up her marriage. She broke her marriage vows and her husband is turning his head to the matter.
Either he is a whimp, or she is one piece of ass that he cannot live without. How could a MAN turn his head to her cheating on him and him taking sloppy seconds?
I hope that once she makes CEO, he will file for divorce on grounds of adultery and release all of the tapes to stockholders, friends, family and anyone else that wants them. If he knows someone with web intelligence, maybe he could put them on a web address and send the address to all of her associates and everyone else.
JPB, this needs a sequel. Ruin the bitch and let him have sweet revenge for her whoring ways. I really think that you should write it where she needs to see a shrink because she is mentally deranged. Maybe the shrink will take his fee out in trade. I would not put it past her to propose the idea to him. If the shrink is a woman, that would even be better.
To the racist black guy demanding money
Sounds good, have everyone pay you money. The you can pay me because my ancestors gave up their lives for you to slaughter the english language.
If you guys do not like JPB writing the just plain stop reading it
TIME OFF
You need to take some time off. Your stories are pathetic any more.
You’ve done great work....take a vacation for a few months.
To the racist in Ohio
You dumb fuck! The blacks didn't slaughter the language. The people who taught them were some ignorant assholes who speak very funny. Think about Louisiana, back in the day their accent was exactly like the way most blacks speak. So if anybody slaghtered the english language, it was those fuckers. As for JPB,he's always been crazy. Only a retard would put up with a wife like this crazy bitch. The husband should just skin her alive, and feed her ass to the pigs.
Is this thing on? Testing - one, two, three....
The vile and crass responses here are amazing. What is the big deal, guys? I say guys, because only guys talk like most of you guttermouths. Look, this is EROTIC FICTION - it's not a social commentary. JPB has a particular slant to stories, true - but if you know that going in, why do you READ the thing if you know it's going to annoy you? Then you have the temerity to lash out at the author because you're so insecure/bigotted/he-manish (take your pick which you call it - it doesn't matter). JPB, sorry to say that this one is not one of your better ones, guy.
She not worth it
This woman is not worth this man trust she violated her marriage vows and has lied to him. I would not touch her again with a ten foot pole she say she protected herself against getting pregnant but what about STD's I go get check by a doctor and dump her ass. If this story is a true one and not a work of fiction I like to be updated on what happens
Weak
Your stories used to really have the best sex and plot all mixed together. However, the last few that I have read from you are pretty weak. The emasculated (sp?) male is NOT a turn on to anyone I know, but it really seems to be a big hit on this website. Please don't be a sheep and just follow the herd. Return to what made you a good erotica author. Leave the weak minded men for the feminazis to read and write about.
fucked up drivel
more ypical jpb slut/whore and super wimp bullshit drivel; jpb please eat a bullet and put us out of your misery
wimp?
I'm actually getting tired of many comments here on POB and others' stories complaining of wimp husbands. I think many of them come from those too shallow enough to get in touch with their own feelings and the only thing they know is anger and revenge. That being said, this IS the ultimate wimp story. There is no development or story beyond a cheating wife's explaination "it didn't take anything away from you" Damm sure it did but I guess this guy never had it anyway.
What A Load Of Horseshit!!!
"Feminine Reasoning" is bullshit; all it ever is is cheap justification for doing something wrong. Does he get a lot of sex? Yes! But why? Because she loves him? No. Not at all! She feels he should be content with whatever she is willing to give him. It's just to salve her conscience that she gives him so much "that sometimes you push me away". She should be doing that and to no one else but him! That is what she swore to God and Humankind at her wedding years before. And as for doing it on company time, or using her work activities, a case for Intentional Infliction of Emotional Distress Can be made here, as Cyn is using her job to cover her illegitimate activities.
Doesn't she, the impending CEO, realize that she can lose the company its' proverbial shirt? If our benighted hubby wants to hurt her, THAT'S THE BEST WAY! In the job/pocketbook! Spousal support, and a huge settlement, court ordered or otherwise would go a long way toward paying for company for me, so I could ditch the bitch, and never look back! And THATS what SHOULD happen. And soon!!
Before her "precautions" go bye-bye!!
Why did he have to be a N........
It shows you're true feelings. It's not a BLACK man's fault that your white lady likes to fuck Black Dick. It's not the White man's fault that Black women like to fuck White dick! It's all about sex! I fuck all races because everybody's pussy is different at least for a while. Leave race out of your story. Especially if your are gonna be a BITCH in the end!
She don't love him !!!
It seems its a half story because the cheating and whoring and lying wife talk but he don't talk and his wife don't worry about him and his feeling and worries ! On the contrary she said it was only ego !!!! No its not !!! This wife is only interristing by her feeling not his feelings !!! She don't love him !!!
Wimp husband and interracial fantasy!
What a pile of dog shit.
the laast of your stories iwill read
weak wimp stories what a loss of my time reading
God, I hope you don't breed.
Ever.
Disease, Lying, Wimpiness, Unabated Fury.
This story isn't worth the comments. I reserve them for better stories.
I agree with most other comments.
At least, JPB, you had the courage to permit public comments on this story, and you got plenty. Some other stories you have written have no public comments permitted, probably because you already know what the comments would be like! Cynthia cares nothing for her spouse, she only cares for herself. If her extramarital sex is no big deal, why did she keep it secret? It's only hurting his "ego." What about the lost time that they are not together? She was out of town a few times each month, presumably for a few days each time; so she is gone perhaps 20-25% of the days in a month, correct? Since a lot of that time is spent doing the gang-bang thing, it is unnecessary to her work and it is recreation that does not include her husband. She has been doing it prior to her marriage and continued it ever since her marriage began. Why be married? She has her freedom, she has her success and makes enough in her job, what really is her purpose in being married? Reality is that she is bound to come home with a disease and pass it to her husband. The stats are against her remaining free of STD's since she does not practice safe sex and she clearly does not know her partners well. Of course, it is possible you simply meant this story to be a satire, showing how silly the justification of the "loving wife" for her affairs appears to anyone with half a brain. BTW, the heavy emphasis on the interracial theme makes me feel this story should be in that category, not loving wives.
a very poor excuse for a story about loving wives.
you really should learn to count! lets see. on average she fucks upwards of 400 strange cocks bareback in all her openings each year while spending as much as fifty percent of her time away from her husband and he should be thankfull,(you neglected to mention how often she brought home a STD. she has as many as three or four periods a month while she is lieing and decieving him and he should be gratefull. oh! and she does this in all the cities where she does business but no one will ever know!
perhaps you, ve been reading to much Harry Potter!
to quote
she is white he is white she fucks niggers id rather fuck a dog than fuck a white woman that will fuck a nigger idsay kill her and put her out of her misery
duh
std wimp! ...........
put a bullet in her slut head
she is a waste of air
rectal issue!!
Piece of human fecal matter, and no rightous ending!
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