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Cynthia's Business Trips

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by Anonymous10/26/08

Great Beginning

It now needs detailed development and descriptions, not just sex summaries. It's probably got 3 or 4 more chapters.

Ignore the donkeys, I don't know why they comment since they have nothing positive to say

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by Anonymous11/28/08

New Story Heading

"Men Without Balls"- WTF kind of male wouldn't smack or at least walk away from that shit. Cuckolded wuss!

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by Anonymous02/03/09

The woman is insane! Totally and completely.

The husband is even more insane for staying with her. You dont have that kind of sex without winding up with a large number of very unfriendly diseases. How in the hell could a man know what she was and still let her touch him much less be around her. She does not love him, never did love him. He is her cover, what she has to hide who and what she is. And why is this not in Interracial it isnt about loving wives it is about woman who love black cocks, you know racial discrimination, and mental instablity.

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by crisscross203705/14/09

Why not Bring Them Home

Why doesn't he let her bring a dozen or so home with her think of the money and time she spends flying all around to get screwed by them, that way she could be getting it non stop, and he would be really happy with her.

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by Anonymous07/10/09

Give her the PI's name

Love your stories. This one I would have taken liberties to added a small paragraph at the end.
"You know these tapes are good quality. Even I got off on them. I bet you did too!
Can you give me the name of the PI. I, or we can use him to tape all my trysts.
I'll tell him what room I'll planning to be in. I'll book it in additional day in advance of my arrival for him to set up the camera angles. Then if you like we can share the moment at a later time."

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by Anonymous08/06/09

She's Good

I gave you 75 because you had him keep her, also because she was very persuasive and convincing. It would be difficult to get rid of an extremely attractive, horny, well educated wife...very difficult!
I think, after she made her point and she talked him into her remaining his wife, I would have him thinking and then when she went on her next trip, I would have had him prepare everything for separation and divorce.
When she returned, have him at the house with a process server, sit her down and tell her he would always love her, always miss her but he couldn't live with an adulterer who he knew would not stop. He would grant her an irreconcilable difference divorce if she cooperated or he would send all the tapes and pictures to her employers, friends and family and sue her for divorce with emotional damages, punitive damages and no fifty percent split of valuables. The divorce papers would be accompanied by a restraning order preventing her from re-entering the house, calling him at home or work and not allowed to be at his business. She would have 30 minutes to gather a weeks supply of personals before leaving and the balance of her things would be packed and shipped to whatever address she gave his attorney. By the way, I personally had to walk away from a similar situation years ago and it almost killed me, I wanted to die, I couldn't stand the agony. I still love her but I never want to be near her again!

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by Anonymous08/11/09

good stuff

enjoyed the story...makes one wonder what they would do in the same situation

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by Anonymous08/25/09

Why black men?

Doesn't that just support a prejudice that's best forgotten? And you're not the only one. Rich

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by Anonymous09/27/09

Ineracial bullshit

I personally hate this kind of garbage and do not see it as any kind of literary value what so ever.

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by saratu05/01/11

No resolve and no ending, I like both. One star!

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by DWornock08/23/11

I gave it 3 stars because there are no 9" cocks.

Of course each to their own. However, I would not want to be rubbing my dick against nigger dicks, even if by proxy.

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by cueball96110/14/11

Let's See.

Okay, I'm a wealthy man. I'm married. My wife has a job which requires her to travel and which she doesn't even need. I do not like this.

Now a new development arises. Quite by coincidence I discover that my wife is not on a business trip, is not even in the city she's supposed to be in, and likes dark meat and a lot of it. I even go so far as to hire a PI and get proof of this.

Now I confront my dear wife with this disturbing news. How does she respond? Does she say she's sorry? Does she even try to spare my feelings? No, she simply lays out the news that this has been going on since we were dating, that it will continue, and that I should be okay with it, as nothing but my ego is being damaged.

I am a normal man. I am not one of those guys who likes to watch or fantasize about this kind of thing. Yet, inexplicably, I continue in this sham of a marriage without a hiccup. I could easily get a divorce. I could find a faithful woman who looked every bit as good. But no, I must continue to live with THIS woman and risk all sorts of STDs and the damage to my pride.

Just one question JPB. Just what the fuck kind of alternate universe does this story take place in?

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by Kyuzio10/30/11

Dwornock is such an idiot....

Wow! Not only does Dwornock have something against anyone older than 28...he's also a racist! "I would not want to be rubbing my dick against nigger dicks, even if by proxy." You seriously think this shit up, DW? Myself, I would just say that I don't want to be rubbing dick against ANY dicks, even by proxy." I'm not homophobic, but I just don't play that game....

I agree, to each his and all that, but the fact that she was completely unrepentant about hurting his "ego" shows that she really has no concern for his feelings. Cyn said, "But you need to know that I'm not going to beg you to forgive me for doing something that only hurt your ego." aren't all our emotions tied into our ego. If someone hurts your feelings, its because they have touched your ego in some way, otherwise you wouldn't give a shit. Cyn cares about only herself and what the world can give her. And her husband is a door mat!

And Dwornock is an idiot...did I mention that?

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by gyjunkie03/05/12

Trash!!!!

It's a shame that I cannot give anything less than a one star. You are a good writer but most of your stories are B.S.

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by BetterEnding04/02/12

Self Respect

What man with an ounce of self respect would put up with this? Not one. Nobody to like in this story. Damn, at a minimum have the husband give the wife some of her own medicine. Pathetic.

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by semofuncpl308/22/12

Piece of crap

Any man that would do that isn't a man. As far as niggers, I know both blacks and niggers. Niggers are just like white trailer trash except for their skin color. They join in gang bangs tool None of the blacks or whites I know would join in a gang bang. Just the trailer trash and niggers

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by Talonsreach09/05/12

ugh

The ending for this one seriously sucked, JPB. Sorry, man, I know I like a lot of your stuff but not this one.

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by symtron11/12/12

Story line ending sucks, but great story

I didnt like the ending BUT the story is a great one. I didnt see him being cuck'd like that....anyway I liked the buildup and keep them coming....I'm a fan of yours...

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by cantbuymy11/12/12

Aids

Aids, std's, and a gang bang whore for a wife. If you like the money live with her but never fuck her.

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by betrayedbylove02/07/13

Damn

Fucking worthless cuck. A chapter 2 giving him some side pussy might give this tale a betting ending.

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by Stiffylube03/31/13

So was the problem that she cheated or that she cheated with black men?

JPB, I've read some of your stuff, and liked it a great deal, but this story really damaged my view of you. I'd like to think that the bigotry shown in this story was simply a part of the character (and a glaring flaw) and not some part of you that has shown through in the writing. It just seems like the fact that the men were black was a bigger insult to this guy that the fact that she cheated at all. Which is ridiculous.

I hope none of your other stories give me this bad taste.

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by Overthefalls05/09/13

Big mistake, terrible ending

I can't understand why he'd take the risk. She can still get Aids, herpes and HepC from oral sex. And she's throwing her bad behavior in his face. And how about his pride and self respect? Can he really live with her actions? Even if he goes out and sleeps with other women he still is living with a cheating slut. Since he has the financial capability why wouldn't he divorce her and try and find someone that actually had some respect for him? Sorry but this was a TERRIBLE ending.

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by Drbeamer333306/09/13

Enjoyed it

He should be worried. Not sure how he could get by this. Not sure how she could say she loves him and not feel an ounce of remorse.

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by Old5107/01/13

Sorry Just not buying this one.

It is a story I will give you that but I do not know one man that would put up with this shit after he saw her in KC! Most men I know would have walked over to her table full of niggers and confronted her and flew home straight to the divorce lawyers. Ok the next thing is this guys rich? Rich and he doesn't just dump her for a better,younger more faithful model??? Sorry Bob but this is just too unlikely to be any fun!

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by maninconn09/04/13

It's kind of an abrupt ending.

How does he suddenly go from angry and seemingly headed for tossing her to non-chalant acceptance?

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by cantbuymy09/04/13

now that the cunt is rich divorce her, make her pay you, take half of what she has plus a little more and rent yourself a good young whore. another example of how JPB hates women and cant write a good into any story.
and what happens when the whore gives him AIDS?

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by Lonewolf201311/12/13

Just another lame cuckold story

This is either written by pussy whipped cuckolded man or a cheating slut trying to justify their actions. Not sure which you are but who in their right mind thinks that is anyone's fantasy. Hate the story and would have given it a 0 rating but I have to settle for the next lowest rating of 1.

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by tae35200112/02/13

where did anyone get pussy whipped husband

he had guts, what everyone lost track of... Her love for him was strong. how many men perhaps had money.. wealth or power? she came home fresh, unchanged.. and gave like she said 98 percent to him... most marriages what... 50 percent if lucky.
Great story..

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by bobyroy6901/19/14

Just Pathetic Bob

Can someone write this kind of story without being as PATHETIC in real life. We all know there are people like this in real world and I can bet my last dollar, JPB is one of them...

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by Isactagged02/24/14

Sucks

Really sucks.

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by rightbank02/24/14

Does not fear the risk

of STDs? What makes him settle for half a loaf when with his status, wealth, and physical stature he has to settle at all? This is just wrong on so many levels.

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by FD4502/24/14

Another 'pod people' story

You know...I could get with this story if there was a small change. A man, a poor man, WILL put up with a lot for money. You have written that story twice...and I believed it both times. After all, Catherine the Great never wanted for a bed companion, even when she was old and doughy. She had cash.

THIS man...what is he getting? A simmering anger issue. The change of STDs. The chance that one of these many cocks may fall in love with his wife and try to steal her. The chance that she might fall in love with one of these many men (she says she won't, but she also said she'd be faithful. She's been wrong before). The chance for him to be called by the cops as these MULTIPLE MEN decide they want to try/do things which she doesn't (Golden Showers or Scat sex?) NOW he has a public record problem. OR say they rape her (yeah, willing women can be raped). Now she is a psychological mess and HE gets to clean things up.

So no, this man is stupid or the storyteller wants to drive the story into accepting something that a rational man would find unacceptable.

Now I get to look for the follow up stories to clean the bad taste out of my mouth.

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by tazz31702/24/14

WHEN ONE CANT HAVE THE WHOLE LOAF

should they be satisfied with crumbs. TK U MLJ LV NV

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by Tw0Cr0ws02/24/14

dump her fast

46% of blacks have herpes, having sex with that many blacks especially unprotected makes it a 100% certainty that she will be exposed to and contract HSV

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by lance_spearman03/06/14

I liked the other ending better

The one written by Ohio.

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by Tim41304/17/14

I saw Ohio's chapter 2 and came here to read this first.

I see why it ranked so low. It was well-written, but the ending smelled.

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by EgoTrixi04/30/14

That is the problem, I guess..

...JPB is one hell of a talented writer. If only he could stop worshipping cuckoldry...
Some of his stories actually have husbands w i t h balls in them...but they are the exception. On the other hand, - he is going with the mainstream on this site. It is incredible, just how many readers get off reading that crap. JPB has adjusted just fine.

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by SplitAces07/11/14

What a crock of shit

In no time at all she'd be a crack hoe sold from one black pimp to another. She would never be seen again and dead within a year.

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by impo_5807/11/14

a lot of bullshit...

Sorry Bob. I like almost all your stories, but this one is just too much to swalow...

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by KarenE08/11/14

Burn The Fucking Bitch

I'm sorry, I usually rail against the trolls who complain about wimp-assed cuckolds, but this one deserve it!

He should dump the bitch and let everyone in their families, all their friends and her work colleagues know what she does on her "business" trips.

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by Anonymous08/11/14

Death Wish?

Both of them have a death wish - screwing that many blacks and your odds of HIV approach 100%. Only in fiction can you go 6 years without it happening.

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by Anonymous08/19/14

1 star

1 star
crapola must be an auto bio, civilized man never write fictitious tale of this low life bs.

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by Anonymous11/08/14

Some writers JUSt don't make sense

Hopefully this is just a trial balloon......bad concept..........belongs somewhere else.

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by Anonymous11/08/14

the incidence of HIV infections is or was highest amongst black males

the woman is a walking death trap better to be rid of her before she takes you down with her diseases. Sooner or later others will know and the magic curtain will disappear. IR trash belongs in the IR fetish section. It takes a section kind of man to be a cuck with a woman who in reality doesn't love or respect her husband.

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by sinsational8301/04/15

fuuuuuck

That bitch whore would be so fucking gone. and with the high incidence of HIV and aids in the blacks I would get tested and never touch her ever again. let her have her black cocks a=she would never have mine and after her company saw the video of her I'm sure she wouldn't be CEO or even working for them anymore either.

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by calflash02/03/15

1 star for the punctuation not the story

typical JPB wimp story. She has no remorse and he has no pride. GD being cucked by blacks no less!

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by BetterEnding02/06/15

Ha Ha Ha, She Loves Him

"I love you and I want to be with you forever." You and those other thousand guys. Aren't you so lucky!

What a useless wimp. There is nobody to like in this story.

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by Tw0Cr0ws02/06/15

but the one thing

There is no way I'd stay, not even if she was the only one with money.
Definitely not make her lose her job, she being a VP or CEO means no alimony for her.
If I'm poor then unless there is a prenup with no adultery clause she's screwed.
(and I'm not signing one without that)

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by BuzzCzar02/07/15

Disease

No mention of checking for disease. That is a bad plot hole. I know there are cucks out there that like sharing their wife. I don't claim to understand the draw but it certainly exists. Accepting that as a plot device is one thing but add in this supposedly intelligent man with a complete lack of a self-preservation desire is hard to understand. Bad juju.

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by ohyessssss02/13/15

no thanks

I personally expel shit , then flush it down the toilet. There are millions of attractive women who would love to be married to a good man. If the only thing that's important to you is a great fuck, stay single and buy another whore when you get horny. One star,and that's one too many.

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