All Comments on 'Halloween - The Taker'

Would you mind continuing this as a series?

I was ready for more from this story. It was too short!

Very enjoyable though. I will definitely check out the rest of your stuff!

I think the initial undressing/sexual tension might have been prolonged to good affect. Nice effort and good luck in the contest!

all those who have said 'I'll wait for you until hell freezes',the waitings nearly over!

Well this is certainly unique. I like how the situations build up steadily...you only get a little detail from the first *take*, but things get very explicit by the last one. I was hoping that the author would eventually go into more detail concering what excatly happens when the main charater *takes* someone, though. Oh well, still definitely recommended!

Scary and erotic -- quite a combination! Fantastic writing. Every detail just perfect