by Edge23
intriguing story is written in the style of H P Lovecraft,and,like his tales leaves more questions than answers.Enjoyed reading it.
This writer has written a very clever story one that is perhaps purposely vague yet a very interesting read. I found myself unable to slow down until the end. The character, Wilford Pimm will always remain a mystery to me even though I found him a fascinating read.
One could argure that there are too many loose ends, and the ending was a bit abrupt. This could use a bit of editing (misspelled words, stray period, etc.)However, well off the beaten path and is stronger thereby.
I admit that it was too short for me to get into it, but I really liked your style.
Good luck to you in the contest.