All Comments on 'A Friend in Need'

by Edge23

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
This

intriguing story is written in the style of H P Lovecraft,and,like his tales leaves more questions than answers.Enjoyed reading it.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Distrubing tale!

This writer has written a very clever story one that is perhaps purposely vague yet a very interesting read. I found myself unable to slow down until the end. The character, Wilford Pimm will always remain a mystery to me even though I found him a fascinating read.

sacksackover 17 years ago
delightfully different....

One could argure that there are too many loose ends, and the ending was a bit abrupt. This could use a bit of editing (misspelled words, stray period, etc.)However, well off the beaten path and is stronger thereby.

Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Mysterious

I admit that it was too short for me to get into it, but I really liked your style.

Good luck to you in the contest.

MarkT63MarkT63over 3 years ago

What category would this be under? Sci Fi???

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