All Comments on 'Sex and the Summer Job Ch. 01'

bravo. please do more

Wonderfully scripted passion. could easily feel the heat of lust and intimacy

Nice cunts, nice descriptions, well told......good lesbian sex!

great beginning -- even the coming day is still the beginning, so you need to describe the ripening of their love, you need to lead them to their first crisis ... and then out of it.

So please continue ...

Well written, great characters and some very hot sex. Fantastic story and I look forward to reading the next chapter(s).

Great story isn't the half of it for me. I loved the Seinfeld reference. Got me chuckling and then the build up to the sex with the tenderness and need. Wow. The sex was hot of course. But what really hit me was the end. I started getting all misty eyed when she can't believe that this beauty has come into her life and may disappear at any moment. That very same thing happened to me recently only I'm a guy and she floated off after a fantastic month and a half. I'm still not over her. Thank you for making an erotic story a cathartic experience.

One of the best on this site easily. I can only offer applause!

i came twice.

fantastic.

great story-- great intensity and very easy to visualize !

Mmmmm good.

Beautiful, sensual, erotic and romantic.

Simply orgasmic!!

Beautiful and so loving. My cunt was soaking wet and dripping.. loved it so very much. It describes warm urgent yet gently loving between two loving women so very well. 5 stars! Orpheum 69