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Deadly Artefacts

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/04/06

teenie tiny.

to short make not a lot of sense

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by FallingToFly10/04/06

More of what you are the master of...

Short-short stories that make perfect sense. Good Luck, Ogg.

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by sack10/04/06

excellent, Og!!

Although some would argue you "cut" these stories too cruelly down to size!!

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by Aurora Black10/04/06

Sharp and Precise

Just like the various weapons featured in your shorts, Og. You've done it again.

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by Anonymous10/04/06

Mog Like Ogg writing.....

Vignettes! History? Maybe. To the point!


Swedeq

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by LadyCibelle10/04/06

I'm getting repetitive I know...

but no one does it better than you.

You TRULY are the King of the 50 words stories. :)

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by 10/04/06

Creative and Original

Great craftsmanship is easily recognized here! I loved it!~Good Luck in the contest~

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by pcsocake10/05/06

worth the wait

as always, whenever there's a special holiday contest, i waited for your 50 word stories. this one is worth the wait as well. :) thanks

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by Anonymous10/05/06

Nice work

You had me laughing, this is sicker than my own 50/15 story.

Watch that passive voice though...

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by damppanties10/08/06

Well done again

A lovely title and a good group of stories. I wait for your 15 word stories in every contest, Og. They're always an easy and fun read. Liked 7 and 9 best. :)

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by scriptordelecto10/08/06

Bloody Brilliant !

Only such a talented author could tell so succinct a tale in so few words. To do it repeatedly, well, I am properly in awe. :)

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by Munachi10/09/06

great little stories, as always...

I liked the fact how these ones had a more similar theme and at the same time moved through history... Have no specific favourite one, I liked them all...

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by Selena_Kitt10/09/06

My Fix!

Ahhhhh there's my Og-50/15-fix! I feel so much better now... :) Truly enjoyed them all, I can't even pick a favorite this time!

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by Anonymous10/11/06

A Flagrant Display of Lethal Artistry!

My goodness, it's a dangerous world!

It takes great skill to write these stories and it takes an artist to write them well. You are both a craftsman and an artist.

I enjoyed these immensely!

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by Boxlicker10110/22/06

Creepy

and scary and good. I especially like the way you went through history although I think you omitted the PTO of WW2. You also misspelled "Artifact."

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by Anonymous06/26/07

False pretences

Some horror, most definitely. But where's the "erotic" component?

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