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Wonderful story
I love how she just keeps doing more and more teasing. I am sure her teasing is soon to be punished and that has me excited waiting for Ch. 4 and beyond.
look at me
very hot,reminds me of when i was cutting grass for a lovely neighbor
WOW!!!!!!!!!!
WOW more more more!
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...gets sloppier and sloppier. Do you just phone them in on the way to work now, JPB? Maybe you could look into an editor to pickup the slack. Like the 18 year old boy becoming 15 in the basement.
Good to see you playing with new ideas, but have a little respect for the audience.
Just how old is Billy
In paragraph 2 , you state: Billy was the eighteen year old son , yet later in the same chapter, you have kathleen say to herself:
It was a nice looking cock and she wished she was out there in front of him on her knees and offering him her mouth, but he was only fifteen
So Bob, just how old is Billy...?
An entertaining story but this kind of basic slip up is disapointing... at eighteen, in many jurisdictions Billy would be fair game, at fifteen, it's cradle robbery...
Another 5-star effort.
This is one is well worth a 5-star rating. It, too, is very hot and well written. Thanks, JPB.
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