Mom's Dildo

really REALLY REALLY GREAT!!!!!

i would actually buy this if it was a whole book i love stories like this and you nailed it. i cant wait until u make the 2nd part to it!

I didn't give you a score in the 1-5 rating system

because it would have been a 4

I only give either a 1 or a 5

The bit of ass play dropped it in my mind

when you get into the real stuff in the next chapter I won't read it.

Ass play is strictly a male item---Almost all women hate it. The ones in LIT who say they 'Love it' are really guys

A great start (and WTF???)

I give it a 4 because I really liked the flow of the story. It would have been a 5 but for the quick end without ass play. All in all, a wonderful start to a story.
As to the fact that "Almost all" women hate ass play...this is absurd. You might as well say "Almost all" women hate men. Or "Almost all" men hate baseball. It people that use such broad strokes to define everybody that keeps people from accepting other people.

I say well done and I will definitely read the next chapter. As will "Almost all" of the people who read this first installment.

A great start (and WTF???)

I give it a 4 because I really liked the flow of the story. It would have been a 5 but for the quick end without ass play. All in all, a wonderful start to a story.
As to the fact that "Almost all" women hate ass play...this is absurd. You might as well say "Almost all" women hate men. Or "Almost all" men hate baseball. It people that use such broad strokes to define everybody that keeps people from accepting other people.

I say well done and I will definitely read the next chapter. As will "Almost all" of the people who read this first installment.

Hot stuff!!!

Loved it - can't wait to see what happens next...

holy shit i could have cum

This was a great beginning but why not bring us all in with ass play. no shit that would have been the supreme climax even if you stopped as the dildo entered her ass.

i liked it

i cant wait to see whats happens next

Panties got wet

You could have gotten them soaked,if mom would have caught her in the throws of passion,and joined in with some lesbian incest.

Loved IT!!!!!!!

I loved it when is part 2 coming out?

Excellent Story

I wonder Sandy's mom will adore the new scent on her dildo! What's next?

GREAT STUFF

I JIZZED EVERYWHERE THANKS

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved this story! i do think it would've been better if the mom found her and joined in. but still i give it a 4.7
i even played with my own vibrator. i tried to match the exact movements Sandy did in the story. and i came just like she did!

omg i got so wer i need to know what happens!!

Intro?

A great introduction to a longer story. No doubt about it.
Do you have any ideas about how you want to involve the readers closer to an ending? I'd love to read it, if you do! You left so many holes that it could go in any of lots of directions, maybe more than one at a single time.
Wow! I thought of at least 3 strong, and several medium, directions in only a few seconds. What are your ideas?

good story would love to read more.. its a scenario that I'm sure happens very often and even at a younger age than that.

awesome

I want more. Made me very hard. I fantasize about my wife and mother in law like this

Totally erotic!

I came so hard to this!! The thought of a girl swapping cum on her mom's dildo is so fucking hot, especially knowing the mom is going to use it again after it has been in her daughter's sweet pussy! I actually found a used dildo under the bed of one of my hot customer's once and it was still moist from her using it, so I jacked off on it and put it back under the bed. The thought of her shoving my cum in her pussy without knowing it was amazing and I still jerk to the thought of that every once in a while.

Speaking of which...

Needs another chapter.

moms dick

i would lick mother and daughters cum off the fake cock before shoving it deep inside their hot horny cunts gotta go now and whackoff in the wifes dirty panties this story is just to dirty for a horny man like me peace to you

Please do part 2

I'd really like to see where this goes.

Teaser

This story is too good to end!

Story

I can already tell that this story needs to hurry up. I came 3 times reading this and I am eager for more