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I feel like I know this Sarah, or she reminds me of someone that I know. Oh, well, in any case, it was VERY hot to read about what I just thought would be a threesome, but became a foursome instead. I loved it and gave it a 5. I liked that they used pot (nice touch, and not as prone to accusations of rape as booze) to loosen her up. I also liked how realistic they were about the whole thing (Beth's comment about women and bisexuality, for instance). Overall, it was solid work.
Torrid threesome!
Her name was Allison, and her boyfriend is Eric. Together they scheme to seduce Sarah into having a threesome. Once the three of them start, things rapidly get out of hand,as they engage in hot and sexually consume each other. Hot and Wild! Great Write!
Eh?
How does one have creamy, dark tan skin? It's an oxymoron.
Also wondered why she was deemed to be sexually conservative but yet very 'suggestible' and would do anything after some weed?
The dialogue was pretty good though.
Come to Alaska and Find Out =)
No prob if my story wasn't to your taste, but I'd highly recommend you visit Alaska for a while if you're not sure how you can have creamy and tan skin at the same time... or how pot can make a morally consrevative person quite open to to power of suggestion... =)
Love and Kisses,
Melody
Pleasing All the People All the Time
Melody, it's just not possible. Don't let it bother you. Sometimes its hard to put a vision you have in your head into words. I read the section about creamy skin as being about texture, not color, meaning soft and supple. I dropped you an email with a few other suggestions and ideas, by the way.
Good hot read but...
This was amazingly hot but it ends too soon....
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