CvsN 12: Joe's Sleepover

Wellcome back.

Good read.

great story line

Great story line!

Give us more!!

Can't wait for more!

Please keep this story going! There is a lot of situations that you still can explore! Thanks for the great story!

Love how you stoke up the story with real character interaction. Great stuff

VERY HOT

I love that deb took the control. she has such a good heart. giving Joe what every man would love to have. love the description of doing the anal. It is one of my favorite positions, both giving and receiving. keep up the stories.

Angie!

You need to use more songs.

Angie made this an instant 5 :)

Beautiful!!

I absolutely love the character development being in sync with the story line. I have to admit that I'm a bit if a sucker for the Debbie type characters in society. Such a woman can be a great asset if they trust enough to be trusted (if you can pick up what I'm putting down). I was worried about what I'd feel when it finally came time for her to be shared. What I found was that you wrote this chapter perfectly, with her being in control. Quite possibly, the ONLY way for it to be as hot AND believable as it was. Kudos sir!!!

just right

Good scene with Joe. Well done. With Debbie's history with men, if SHE hadn't been the one in control - the Boss for the night - then it would have looked like emotional abuse. With Jack shareing her, knowing how fragile she can be and so eager to please. Looking foreward to more.

I could have done without this. It did nothing for me. Jim joe and anyone else added detracts from the core group.