Undercover Ch. 15

TOO SHORT!!!

I love your 2 series and this one particularly, but this chapter was just way too short...why bother submitting it? I was excited to see in the New Stories but hated that it was so brief. I guess I'm just impatient to find out what will happen next!! :)

Outrageous.

Having sex while handcuffed sounds a bit kinky. Different strokes for different folks? Fun Read!

LOVED it.

I adore this series. It ended too soon.

Sigh!

You got me all misty eyes over this chapter. So sweet...sniff...sniff...Absolutely romantic.

captivating

I loved your story...couldn't stop reading!!!! Please write another story soon!

YES, YES,.....YYYYEEEEESSSSS!!!!!

WOW....CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONES, PLEASE CONTINUE...

Nice end

nice end for a good what I think is one of the best romance stories.

loved it

loved it . they never stood a chance. i can't wait for warren to play match maker again

Great read BUT..

Please make chapters LONGER! It's a huge pain in the arse having to keep try to find the next chapter when you're on wap! Please make it clearer where to find next one etc, loved the story good read lots of hot sex just like my work lol

WOW!...

absolutely love this story, great read, great story line, Im waiting impatiently for the next build up in uncle warrens matchmaking...

next offsprings are ???

loved it sooo much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Absolutely brilliant mix

Hi Ada,
I found this story really enjoyable. Had its romantic points and its very sexy points. Just wish it was longer. Your writing and creativity is great. I loved the mix of tension that you kept, and I don't think you could have done it so well if you didn't keep switching between which characters head the reader was inside of.
Keep up the brilliant work. Looking forward to much more. Might even be inspired to start myself.

gahh

I was soo hoping that erin really didn't like him and rejected him by not saying I do. I am just so mad!!!!!
or she would kick him in the balls untill he didn't have them anymore

Love you, but

loose = lose
coach = couch
walk pass = walk past

etc. etc.

more more more more more

more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more...

Umm... yeah, I think you got the point :D ...

Greatness, again....

I loved your story, your characters and the hot sex between them!! Keep writing, please!!!!! :)

Loving It! Loving It!

Now I HAVE tO read ALL OF YOUR SUBMISSIONS. Keep writing.

loved it!

great story!

Omg! Loved your story...and would love to read some more of Warren playing matchmaker with the other family members mentioned in your story