All Comments on 'Undercover Ch. 15'

I love your 2 series and this one particularly, but this chapter was just way too short...why bother submitting it? I was excited to see in the New Stories but hated that it was so brief. I guess I'm just impatient to find out what will happen next!! :)

Having sex while handcuffed sounds a bit kinky. Different strokes for different folks? Fun Read!

I adore this series. It ended too soon.

You got me all misty eyes over this chapter. So sweet...sniff...sniff...Absolutely romantic.

I loved your story...couldn't stop reading!!!! Please write another story soon!

WOW....CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONES, PLEASE CONTINUE...

nice end for a good what I think is one of the best romance stories.

loved it . they never stood a chance. i can't wait for warren to play match maker again

Please make chapters LONGER! It's a huge pain in the arse having to keep try to find the next chapter when you're on wap! Please make it clearer where to find next one etc, loved the story good read lots of hot sex just like my work lol

absolutely love this story, great read, great story line, Im waiting impatiently for the next build up in uncle warrens matchmaking...

loved it sooo much !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi Ada,

I found this story really enjoyable. Had its romantic points and its very sexy points. Just wish it was longer. Your writing and creativity is great. I loved the mix of tension that you kept, and I don't think you could have done it so well if you didn't keep switching between which characters head the reader was inside of.

Keep up the brilliant work. Looking forward to much more. Might even be inspired to start myself.

I was soo hoping that erin really didn't like him and rejected him by not saying I do. I am just so mad!!!!!

or she would kick him in the balls untill he didn't have them anymore

loose = lose

coach = couch

walk pass = walk past

etc. etc.

more more more more moremore more more more more more more more more moremore more more more more...

Umm... yeah, I think you got the point :D ...

I loved your story, your characters and the hot sex between them!! Keep writing, please!!!!! :)

Now I HAVE tO read ALL OF YOUR SUBMISSIONS. Keep writing.

great story!

Omg! Loved your story...and would love to read some more of Warren playing matchmaker with the other family members mentioned in your story

Reads like a woman's romance novel -- Harlequin or whatever. Consistent with the high percentage of comments from women.

Paul in Oklahoma

THAT ENDS WELL. A REALLY GOOD STORY ADA. I HOPE THE NEXT TWO ARE AS GOOD.

Well it finally finished after so many twists and turns! Well written and very sexy, thanks, the longer stories and chapters are much more enjoyable to me.

Keep up the good work

enough twists and turns for most mystery lovers and lots of fun and sex would love to try some of the shenanigans but cannot imagine getting away with any of them in our METOO world today

"Great story

enough twists and turns for most mystery lovers and lots of fun and sex would love to try some of the shenanigans but cannot imagine getting away with any of them in our METOO world today"

- Thanks and I'm really glad that you liked it :-) This is actually one of my absolute favourite stories, even though it's been many years since I wrote it, I still read it from time to time because I think it's fun :-).

As for METOO, luckily this is only fiction and I always enjoy adding pranks and statements that would/should never be accepted in real-life :-) But, in this case I think Cade was probably the one to suffer the most :-)

Job well done. I loved all of the twists and turns in this series of stories. Thanks for sharing them.

Loved the story. Laughed out load several times! Good job!!