The ongoing saga of Gabriel and Desiree's troubled love affair. This writer has the ability to maintain the reader's attention through the skillful manipulations of the story's characters. Well Written!
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Anonymous10/17/06
Love the tension
YOu gotta love the tension. A great storyline. What's in store for the lovebirds??
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Anonymous10/20/06
Superb
The only problem with the story is that we have to wait so long for another excellent chapter to come out.
Glad that her brother is happy about the relationship, so now he doesn't have to deal with my fighting cause of their love for each other
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Anonymous12/27/10
Hot story but umm...
If her mother is a light sleeper and Gabe spanked her, I'm assuming, loudly...
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Anonymous02/14/11
nope Deffinetley her brother
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Anonymous02/19/11
The thing is,
had any of this been real, that Gabe fella would have been tossed in jail over night or at least been given citations at least half a dozen times so far in the story for various assault and/or sexual harassment cases. I can't stand arrogant shits like that. They think every woman is just waiting for that magical touch that only can be supplied by Himself.
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Anonymous05/03/11
No protection after the incident with Jessica... I've always heard that double-dipping is a no no... I think it applies here too? XD
English
oooh
very nice as usual....you're the reason why i keep coming back!
Hmm i sense trouble for the 2 lovebirds...
Loved it...
Thanks HS...I have been waiting eagerly for the next chapter and practically jumped on my mouse when I noticed it!
Its a hot read, but its really sweet too, which is definitely great.
Keep up the great work!
please keep it coming
love the story have been checking all the time for this chapter worth the wait but please write more.
Maintains the interest.
The ongoing saga of Gabriel and Desiree's troubled love affair. This writer has the ability to maintain the reader's attention through the skillful manipulations of the story's characters. Well Written!
Love the tension
YOu gotta love the tension. A great storyline. What's in store for the lovebirds??
Superb
The only problem with the story is that we have to wait so long for another excellent chapter to come out.
Glad that her brother is happy about the relationship, so now he doesn't have to deal with my fighting cause of their love for each other
Hot story but umm...
If her mother is a light sleeper and Gabe spanked her, I'm assuming, loudly...
nope Deffinetley her brother
The thing is,
had any of this been real, that Gabe fella would have been tossed in jail over night or at least been given citations at least half a dozen times so far in the story for various assault and/or sexual harassment cases. I can't stand arrogant shits like that. They think every woman is just waiting for that magical touch that only can be supplied by Himself.
No protection after the incident with Jessica... I've always heard that double-dipping is a no no... I think it applies here too? XD
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