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grisly!
poor ol Dub... that'll teach him not to pick up strange girls! Great story that's suitably horrific for Halloween.
Good luck :)
Pick up time!
Dub picks up a shy young lass and proceeds to put the moves on her. When it's time for dinner, it's on old Dub. This is one scary tale.
Good luck in the contest.
Well, he did offer her dinner ...
Nice story TE999. Short, sweet and a fair bit of heat. Too bad for Dub though.
Ouch!
Interesting story! On Halloween there's a little more to worry about than STDs when you have sex with a stranger! Good luck in the contest.
Dinner is served!
There is a delicious sense of forshadowing in this story! You can tell something's going to happen to Dub, and quite frankly, he's such a womanizer that you want it to be something bad. And boy, does it! The sex is vivid and satisfying, and the surprise is swift!
all in good fun....
maybe a little too quick at the end, I would have preferred a slower, more sinister transition into the "beast", like Chinese water torture.
I liked it
A little predictable from the title, but I enjoyed the story. Would have loved MORE descriptive gore and a lengthier slaughter scene, but that's just personal preference. Gave you a 5.
Great!
Short and sweet and there is death...always good for a horror story!! We like when cocky sorts get theirs..grin.
Fusionnee (Abs and Vana)
Very erotic!
A little predictable but a great telling of a classic idea!
Enjoyable
The characters were a bit on the cardboard side, but a fairly creepy tale over all.
very nice...
or not so nice for Dub... a good Halloween story...
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