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ungenderlessungenderlessover 17 years ago
Fun and sexy!

At first I couldn't figure out how this story was so different from the others that I have read...then it hit me - there was no dialogue! This does not detract from the story at all. In fact, in some ways, it makes it flow more smoothly. Oh, and I loved the canine vs. feline theme. A fun read!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Short and sweet

Cats and dogs reference, nice touch.

sacksackover 17 years ago
suitably creepy....

I think some dialogue could have punctuated the keypoints however. Good luck in the contest!

gnome_mangnome_manover 1 year ago

Are Natalie's loins pure? Did she like it when the catgirl purred into her loins?

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Former SR71 pilot, currently professional writer and book editor; writes under name "habu" on other erotica sites. My erotica books can be found under the author name habu or Dirk Hessian (and coauthored books with Sabb under the names Shabbu or Stephen Kessel) at S...