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by Anonymous

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by ungenderless10/07/06

Fun and sexy!

At first I couldn't figure out how this story was so different from the others that I have read...then it hit me - there was no dialogue! This does not detract from the story at all. In fact, in some ways, it makes it flow more smoothly. Oh, and I loved the canine vs. feline theme. A fun read!

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by Anonymous10/07/06

Short and sweet

Cats and dogs reference, nice touch.

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by sack10/08/06

suitably creepy....

I think some dialogue could have punctuated the keypoints however. Good luck in the contest!

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