Thanks for the comments on my story, Allison's Day. I appreciate your feedback.
I made Cindy's Dreams one of my favorites several weeks ago. It's an incredible story with great visuals. I felt like I was right in the middle of it. I like reading Cindy's thoughts and feelings as much as the physical descriptions. Great pacing, and you had the emotional experience of public nudity down pat. Nice work!
Neatly done! I like the combination of shyness and boldness, with building excitement. I also like the hints that this hot fox looks like a real woman, instead of meeting some absurd and impossible standard of perfection. I'll be looking for more!
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Hot!
I truely hope there will be a continuation!
Fuckin hot
Write more
Outstanding
Great, write more!!!!
Well done!
Thanks for the comments on my story, Allison's Day. I appreciate your feedback.
I made Cindy's Dreams one of my favorites several weeks ago. It's an incredible story with great visuals. I felt like I was right in the middle of it. I like reading Cindy's thoughts and feelings as much as the physical descriptions. Great pacing, and you had the emotional experience of public nudity down pat. Nice work!
Nice one!
Neatly done! I like the combination of shyness and boldness, with building excitement. I also like the hints that this hot fox looks like a real woman, instead of meeting some absurd and impossible standard of perfection. I'll be looking for more!
Awesome
That definitely got my panties wet.
OMG
I have to say that this is the first story in a long time that actually had me stroking myself halfway through...any chance of a continuation???
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